Cut Loose (Heechul/Kyuhyun)

[emberberry]

Pairing: Heechul/Kyuhyun, past Heechul/someone else
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Shouldn't Heechul get what he wants? He wants Kyuhyun to come back sooner.
Word count: 2,915

A/N: fanfic. what is fanfic…? lol how do I usually do things around here again? kidding, kidding. so, this is for unactivist , Michele, my love. it is an ungodly hour and I finally finished this

Comments

om nom I love you

[emberberry]

spot for unactivist &hearts! happy christmas new year holiday mashup thing, hooray!

rawr i love you too

[unactivist]

They could both die together, like this, in a way some people would write about and make people want to cry over if their hearts were made of mush.

why so amazing. ;________________;

and, why is heechul is tragic and beautiful and stupid and perfect, ohmygod. i love this. i love your kyuhyun, so precious. thank you for this. ♥

Re: rawr i love you too

[emberberry]

using metafictional elements just makes me seem cooler. it is all an illusion! XD

I glad you love this ♥ because it is for youuu of course, yet I am reiterating that fact!

[onespringday]

hmm. no really, that's how i feel. i feel very contemplative about this.

i like both of them, a lot, and the whole concept is interesting. i like how awkward kyuhyun is. he's a "cat with big paws"! and so committed but too young to be so.

i felt the suspense build, i wondered how it could pan out, so i liked the ending. i liked the uncertain resolution, the vagueness - because it's heechul's ghost, not kyuhyun's. i think it's interesting that heechul created the ghost to deal with his own anger, at himself, i suppose, and gave it the form of someone else he once loved, though it made me want to know how he destroyed that other person. it makes me concerned for kyu.

thank you for sharing, and making me all hmm-y! :D

[emberberry]

thank you! I like to make people thing :) thank you for this lovely comment!