the beautiful side of somewhere [1/?]

Jun 08, 2008 16:02



title: the beautiful side of somewhere
author: spindriftt
rating: pg-13 (domestic violence, language)
pairings: jaemin; jongkey; sunye/changmin friendship; various others
disclaimer: I am not LSM or JYP.  I don't own any of the artists in this story.

in which changmin has to deal with vandalized pants, flu-shots and movado watches, PMS (or general ( Read more... )

fanfiction: tbss, rating: pg-13, pairing: jaemin, fandom: shinee, fandom: wonder girls, fandom: dbsk

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figmagination June 9 2008, 04:23:44 UTC
I love the quirkiness of your characters. XD The SunMin friendship is really adorable. And I love how awkward the JaeMin is at the moment. I love your narrative style and I can't wait to read more!~

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spindriftt June 9 2008, 21:26:10 UTC
Thank you so much for reading <333
I want to see SunMin meet in real life naow.

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kurogoma June 9 2008, 08:34:03 UTC
very interesting AU, and i like. :D

changmin is just so fumbling and awkward, especially the scene when he thought jaejoong was homeless and playing for tips. LOL
would like to see how that relationship grows since they seemed to be rather different on the surface.

why do i have a feeling that junsu and his playgirl are going to come back and haunt min again? LOL ♥

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spindriftt June 9 2008, 21:29:25 UTC
Isn't he adorable and dorkified? xDD
Oh, they are different. But that's what's making this so fun to write.

LMAO. Junsu and his playgirls will indeed be coming back.

Thanks a lot for reading and commenting, dear <33

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chloe1910 June 9 2008, 10:05:00 UTC
Hm..intersting plot...Minnie seems to be a rather intriguing person..and his friendship with Sun Ye is seriously interesting...

So i sense Min's immediate attraction towards Jaejoong? I hope their path wil cross more in future...

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spindriftt June 9 2008, 21:32:45 UTC
Thanks so much for reading!!!
Yeah, I'll be developing SunMin's relationship further in sidestory-thingies, based in the past. In the next few chapters, I think you'll be able to tell that they have an interesting and kind of strange bond.

Min's in denial and kind of spooked right now as to why he's noticing things like Jae's shiny lips xDD
But don't worry, jaemin will be crossing paths again and again.

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mrsedjack June 9 2008, 14:08:15 UTC
I have no idea where this story is going with all of those couples, but it certainly seem very interesting so far. :) I love the way you've described everything in details - I went O.O!! at your vocabulary. 8D

I love AU's. ^^;;

By the way - I laughed so hard at Changmin's little thing with keeping his room tidy. XD I'm like that too sometimes. All of my folders and things are labeled, and really, it's just disgusting now that I think about it.

I can't wait for more! ♥

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spindriftt June 9 2008, 21:39:40 UTC
To tell the truth, a lot of the couples are very minor, or temporary. The main pairings are Jaemin, Sun ye/Attack (Dol Bong), and Sun ye/Jonghyun (because SHINee, like, took over my mind). I just hope I don't lose my head with all the other couples XD;;

I adore AUs now. Blame the amazing people on _starcandy. :D

ROFL; I based that part of his personality off a friend that's very much like that, except all the time. His ideal birthday gift is a pack of wetwipes. But organization is GOOD although I fail at it.

Anyway, thank you so much for reading and commenting! ♥

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mrsedjack June 11 2008, 17:34:43 UTC
I reread it just now and realised - I really liked this line:

, and let George Washington float to the cement where the musician would spot it. -shrugs- Not sure why, but it's very funny. I can see it in slow motion inside my head.

Looking forward to Jonghyun, you're not the only one who has been mind attacked by SHINee. XD I love Onew. And Key. ♥ And of course Taemin for his totally awesome dancing skills. I'd better stop now before I go on to Jonghyun and Minho too. x.x

I haven't written AUs before (and if I have, it's only one-shots), but I'm writing one now. :D I think it's the same case as yours. _starcandy has brainwashed me into liking it.

XD;; Well. I can tell you that my closet is just as messy as everyone else's.

Welcome! I'm still waiting for the second part! ;D

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emda June 12 2008, 00:57:20 UTC
wow... love your writing style and is a long chapter!!!! (love long chapters)
Seems realistic, witty and has the right amount of intrigue-ness. Love how you portray Min and the awkward first meeting with Jae. Looking forward to this story.

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spindriftt June 13 2008, 23:27:38 UTC
Thank you! <33

I keep restarting Jae's POV (next chapter). Maybe he's made of too much mystery? xDD

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