edit it please!

[spinelesskarma]

I grew up in a perfect suburban house in a perfect suburban family. I went to nice schools and got a great education. Then when the foreign exchange councilor talked to my English class everything changed. I chose Australia because the guys were cute and they had nice accents. Kangaroos and beautiful weather wouldn’t be hard to become

Comments

[djbeefy]

The voice in your writing makes me miss you oh so much, Morgan. I enjoyed reading this, it's a great personal journey, and it makes my respect for you as a person even greater. =)

[spinelesskarma]

any edits? its a short story for my core class. this is my rough draft. anything?
morgs

[djbeefy]

I have never forgotten the lessens I learned from Australia.

lessens = lessons

thats about it

[spinelesskarma]

sweet ass mang
thanks!

[spinelesskarma]

ps- australian people. some of this is fiction. (obviously) =).

hahaha

[villanova]

yeah i noticed that *thinking I never saw incubus WTF* :P

Spelling:
Canberra ( i dont know if that'll matter)

but thats my little bit of input, i think you wrote it well!!

oxoxoxox

Re: hahaha

[spinelesskarma]

you are my favorite!
i miss you
write me
whats going on with you???
kisses

[sil_houette]

awesome story morgan... the only thing that i really caught was in the paragraph about the hot dogs... you said "step father", where in the rest of the story you referred everyone else as a "host" relation.

good luck!