[fanfiction] following the trail of string

Apr 21, 2009 22:43

Title: following the trail of string
FANFICTION: TVfXQ
ONE SHOT
Rating: R? language and other things
Comments: Written for the 2nd round of the Yunchun Music Video Exchange over at yunchun_ywh and for sunshineyes, who wrote the captivating companion piece Smile, Little Lamb. Feel free to write your own sequel if this isn't satisfying enough =)

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naeve14 April 22 2009, 14:09:23 UTC
OMG!!!

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At least, they died together.... *sobs*

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tamiko_unknown April 23 2009, 11:39:43 UTC
Thanks for reading ^^

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tamiko_unknown April 23 2009, 11:46:26 UTC
Nitpick away~ =) I don't write often, and I know it shows >_>;;

I'm really glad that you liked it~ ^^ With a story like yours I first went SQUEE then O_O... it was definitely a challenge to follow-up.

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tamiko_unknown April 24 2009, 11:42:50 UTC
Ah, definitely major plot fails XD;; I have no excuses for the last two and can only account to my ignorance about life in general for the first one.

I greatly appreciate your constructive criticism ^^ This made me realize that I don't write plot-based stories often (enough). I guess I'm more of an emotionally based writer, but good emotions does not equal good plot, so it's something I'll concentrate on improving in future writings.

Thank you again~! =3

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renichifreak April 23 2009, 13:49:51 UTC
::sits in shock::

TTTT__TTTT

this was amazing, even though they died...TT__TT

Fab job!!

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tamiko_unknown April 24 2009, 11:43:39 UTC
Sorry for the shock >_> But thank you for reading~! ^^

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justynapoland April 24 2009, 09:56:18 UTC
T_T why, oh why did you have to kill them both? But at least they were together. Any ideas what hapedned to JJ and Su?

great job!

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tamiko_unknown April 24 2009, 11:48:17 UTC
I'm sorry for making you sad >_>;; And no, I didn't think about what happened to Jaejoong and Junsu... :'D

Thanks for reading~! ^^

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yukimiya87 July 26 2012, 12:58:08 UTC
My face = :O <- literally.

I was blown away. And the ending! I feel like my heart stopped at the imaginary sound of the cocked gun.
This was a wonderful read, thank you.

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