Title: following the trail of string
FANFICTION: TVfXQ
ONE SHOT
Rating: R? language and other things
Comments: Written for the 2nd round of the
Yunchun Music Video Exchange over at
yunchun_ywh and for
sunshineyes, who wrote the captivating companion piece
Smile, Little Lamb. Feel free to write your own sequel if this isn't satisfying enough =)
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At least, they died together.... *sobs*
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I'm really glad that you liked it~ ^^ With a story like yours I first went SQUEE then O_O... it was definitely a challenge to follow-up.
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I greatly appreciate your constructive criticism ^^ This made me realize that I don't write plot-based stories often (enough). I guess I'm more of an emotionally based writer, but good emotions does not equal good plot, so it's something I'll concentrate on improving in future writings.
Thank you again~! =3
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TTTT__TTTT
this was amazing, even though they died...TT__TT
Fab job!!
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great job!
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Thanks for reading~! ^^
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I was blown away. And the ending! I feel like my heart stopped at the imaginary sound of the cocked gun.
This was a wonderful read, thank you.
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