Push

Nov 26, 2012 02:53

Fandom: EXO
Title: Push (1/2)
Rating: NC-17
Pairing(s): Baekyeol
Summary: Baekhyun was in every form of the word - a tease. And also good at math.
Warning(s): dominate!Baekhyun and just pure porn without plot
Word Count: 3,012

“You know if you helped me, this would go by a lot faster,” Chanyeol mumbled. )

pairing: baekyeol, length: one-shot, genre: romance, rating: nc-17, fanfic!, genre: smut

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spiritkitkat November 26 2012, 08:55:23 UTC
SPOT for Zeze ^^

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zeraiya November 26 2012, 09:17:45 UTC
SCCCRRRRRRRRRRRRRRREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEECCCCHHHHHHHHHHIIINNNNNNNNNNNNNGGGGGGG.

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zeraiya November 26 2012, 10:18:37 UTC
SORRY, I KIND OF HAD TO COLLECT MY WITS BEFORE I COULD COMMENT PROPERLY. THE QUESTION NOW IS DO I KEEP YELLING AT YOU OR DO I REMOVE THE CAPS.

I'll try and stop yelling at you - yeah, this isn't soft porn, but then again I don't think you were properly listening to my explanation. "Soft porn" is when he don't have explicit sexual material - it can also mean when you don't have explicit sexual acts. And uh, honey, blowjobs and fucking fingering another person is an explicit sexual act SO YEAH, THIS ISN'T SOFT PORN. You usually know when you read soft porn to be honest. For example, I haven't ever written soft porn (well I have, but not in the K-pop fandom, so). SO YEAH, STOP POUTING AND W/E BECAUSE THIS IS NOT SOFT PORN.

AND OH LOOK I'M YELLING AT YOU AGAIN, WELL TOUGH BECAUSE I'M GOING TO STAY YELLING BECAUSE HOLY FUCK CHANYEOL BEING A NEEDY WHINY LITTLE BITCH IS KIND OF ONE OF MY KINKS AND IT'S JUST SO FILTHY AND GORGEOUS AND WONDERFUL AND ALSO LETS FACE IT BAEKHYUN CERTAINLY HAS THE HANDS AND FINGERS FOR MAKING CHANYEOL A ( ... )

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spiritkitkat November 26 2012, 22:24:31 UTC
I READ THIS WHOLE WITH A SCREAMING VOICE IN MY HEAD. LOL.

I swear you used the words "soft porn" and "foreplay" synonymous with each other. Haha. But okay, I'll consider it as another thing that just flew over my head or in one ear and out the other. I should try to listen more carefully in the future... I feel like that could help a lot of things. So then do you consider soft porn things like "and they touched and kissed, making love long into the night." Because I just consider those FUCKING TEASES DESCRIBE IT IN VULGAR WORDS PLZ. AND I WASN'T POUTING I WAS BUT LIES

SEE THIS IS WHEN THE SCREAMING IN MY HEAD STARTED. AND EVEN NOW AS I WRITE THIS THE VOICE IS SCREAMING. WITCHCRAFT. Chanyeol just got trapped lol. And I don't even know how that happened all the sudden he was just FUCKING HIMSELF ON BAEKHYUN'S FINGERS AND I CAN'T WRITE DIRTY TALK AND /DEAD ( ... )

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meejingwen November 26 2012, 13:48:13 UTC
LEGIT. FUCKING LEGIT. LET ME RUN INTO THE SUNSET AND FIND ALL THE RAINBOWS IF THERE IS ANY.

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meejingwen November 26 2012, 13:48:33 UTC
OH AND THE SECOND PART. I'M WAITING. OH GAWD, LET ME LOVE YOU.

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spiritkitkat November 26 2012, 21:29:42 UTC
I LOVE RAINBOWS. But its winter where I live and all we have right now is bitter cold. :(

And the second part shall come! sometime soonish

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digindeeper November 26 2012, 14:42:59 UTC
omgomgomgomgomg i can't wait for the second part to be posted OMG

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spiritkitkat November 26 2012, 21:34:13 UTC
Haha. ^^ Hopefully it will be posted soon, but school and sickness, curse you cold is awful and tries to get in the way of things.

Soon though! :)

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digindeeper November 29 2012, 00:54:08 UTC
ohnoooooooo, i hope you get better soon.

no rush with the update (i actually haven't checked yet at this point) - but you're an awesome writer, so waiting is worth it :D

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fer_yeol November 26 2012, 15:59:39 UTC
OMG WOAH OMG IM JUST
SO MANY PRONZ HELP
/SCREAMS

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spiritkitkat November 26 2012, 21:38:33 UTC
GIVE IN TO THE PRONZ. GIVE IN TO THE FEELS. GIVE IN TO EVERYTHING. (ノ ̄д ̄)ノ

GIVE IINNNNNNN

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euphorias November 26 2012, 16:26:30 UTC
/crying because this is gorgeous and you deserve more brownie points
My Baekyeol feels have finally returned, thanks to all the photos from SMTOWN SG/BKK and this did not help.
They've been dead for so long but they're finally back. :( /cries harder
This is lovely and I love this, omg. Waiting for Part 2! :)

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spiritkitkat November 26 2012, 21:46:40 UTC
;A; I like brownies.

Ah, but Baekyeol feels should be treasured!!!!

I actually do understand how some feels for pairings can fade. It's happened to me before. They always seem to come back though. Because once an OTP, always an OTP.

But yeah, it seemed like with all those wonderful, amazing OMG PERFECT pictures from SMTOWN a bunch of Baekyeol fics started popping up. Well I mean, I already know of mine and my friend's, but that seems like more Baekyeol than I've seen recently. Then again I've been writing a lot so I don't have much time to read...

I'm glad this aided you in recovering some feels though! ^^ Hopefully Part 2 will be helpful too. :)

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