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pendora_lass February 18 2008, 23:24:17 UTC
Thanks, PJ :) And yes, it's definitely something I've noticed in parents and their children. I myself have sometimes resented the fact that I got a certain trait or characteristic from one of my parents...I'd rather just be "me" I suppose.

But anyhow, thanks for reading and commenting :)

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nazgilly21 February 18 2008, 22:58:43 UTC
-soft happy sigh-

For a first LOST fic, this is amazing. Really, I'm not just saying that. I adore the look into Charlie's past, and how he resented being compared to his mother or father and how that was such a big part of character.

And then how Aaron changed all that...aww, words fail me! Just Charlie seeing Claire in the baby and then seeing HIMSELF is so sweetly perfect and melt-worthy!! That part 'foolish as he knew it might seem, Aaron had inherited his ears' made me grin like a lunatic. :D As did the last line, the echoing of the description of Charlie's smile...

And we're gonna get a HUNDRED of these!? -is ecstatic-

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pendora_lass February 18 2008, 23:39:09 UTC
Aw, thanks so much, Jolie :D Your good opinion means a lot :)

I've always seen Charlie as Aaron's father as he IS the one who has loved him, cared for him, been there for him since he was born. And since people always say their whole perspective changes once they become a parent I thought Aaron would be to the one to do that for Charlie.

And we're gonna get a HUNDRED of these!? -is ecstatic-

That is the plan! I hope I can get to all of them. But this one didn't take too much time once I committed to it, so maybe it will be easier to finish the challenge than I thought it would :)

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madcowre February 18 2008, 23:32:35 UTC
Awwww soooo sweet!!! and Icon <3 :D

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pendora_lass February 18 2008, 23:41:07 UTC
Thank you! And yeah, isn't that cute? It was made by green_queen :)

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sapphire_child February 19 2008, 00:59:18 UTC
Squee!

I know I said it before but really, this is just ADORABLE. Great use of the prompt and photograph - that baby's ears really do look like Dom's don't they? Haha, poor kid ^_^

Well done and congratulations on your first fic hon!

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pendora_lass February 19 2008, 01:09:42 UTC
Thanks, Ellin! I think this was a good one for me to start out with as it was light and (therefore) somewhat easier than some other story lines I could have attempted.

Well done and congratulations on your first fic hon!

Thank you very much, ma'am *bows*

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sapphire_child February 19 2008, 01:46:11 UTC
My first fanfiction was actually a poem lol. And then I did a Charlie-centric fic and it all just kind of snowballed from there =P

Crazy stuff.

*bows back*

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pendora_lass February 19 2008, 03:35:26 UTC
Really? I would love to read that if you still have it around :)

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littletons February 19 2008, 01:47:47 UTC
Awww this was absolutely adorable! I just love Charlie and Aaron's relationship so much, and this was just perfect. The thought of Aaron inheriting a bit of Charlie is just so heart warming! I'm still 'awwing' as I type. :D You did a brilliant job with this, and well done!

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pendora_lass February 19 2008, 01:57:31 UTC
Charlie and Aaron's relationship was probably my most favorite relationship of all :( Thank goodness there's fanfiction though....where their relationship can live on :)

I'm so pleased you liked the fic, I'm always happy to provide someone with an "awww" moment :) Thanks for reading/reviewing!

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