Comments | split_the_ocean: {fic} - One day, the sun rises in the west

split_the_ocean

{fic} - One day, the sun rises in the west

Apr 10, 2010 19:40

Title: One day, the sun rises in the west.
Author: ( Read more... )

fanfiction, character: sheldon cooper, character: penny, pairing: sheldon/penny, fandom: big bang theory

Comments 41

she_burns1 April 10 2010, 17:58:19 UTC

LOL - I posted apoc!fic two second after you - we're mind twins!!!

I want to give this a through read but I have to go to work! :(

I'll post better feedback later tonight! BE PREPARED!

split_the_ocean April 10 2010, 18:01:00 UTC

Hee, I saw that too! Lol, great minds think alike ;)
*scurries off to read yours*

she_burns1 April 11 2010, 03:34:36 UTC

Okay, FINALLY I can reply! This was really great! I loved Sheldon's countdown and the quiet moments between them. I loved the description of the car. I just loved all of it! Great job! :DDD

split_the_ocean April 11 2010, 09:55:52 UTC

Thank you!! :D

I'm glad you liked Sheldon counting down; that was the first part to come to me and the rest sort of built itself around that :)

renisanz April 10 2010, 19:58:34 UTC

WHAAAAAAAAAT?!

You guys are killing me with this apocafic, seriously. But yeah, this was pretty perfect. I'm sure you could easily get away with a PG-13 rating, since there's nothing graphic.

But...omg, the imagery. I'm kind of a fiend for it, in case you haven't noticed, and the scene at the end just makes my heart swell and break all at once.

Awesome job.

split_the_ocean April 10 2010, 21:07:31 UTC

Oh thank you! Imagery is one of my favourite things to write, so its always nice when other people enjoy it too!

Oh and that last scene? I think I rewrote it about ten times; it was insanely difficult to get it just right.
Thanks for the wonderful comment =D

sinstralpride April 10 2010, 20:33:45 UTC

Wowza. This is pretty fantastic. *__*

I'm a huge fan of apocafic, so seeing it make another appearance at Paradox kind of makes me squee like a 13 yr old girl at a Jonas Brothers concert. XD

I love the sense of mystery about what is happening and why, contrasted with the clarity of what is happening to Sheldon and Penny, emotionally and mentally.

Keep up the good work! [Also, I never object to more of an apocaverse. XD]

split_the_ocean April 10 2010, 21:14:25 UTC

Appropriate icon is very appropriate.

Oh I'm so glad that you picked up on the mystery of it all, I was a bit worried that it might be a bit too vague so I'm glad that it worked!

Hehe, now that you mention it, I could write a bit of a prologue to this. We'll see :P
Thank you for reading!

misskoum April 10 2010, 20:59:37 UTC

Wow. I don't know what to say!

*wanders off to gather the pieces of her broken heart*

split_the_ocean April 10 2010, 21:17:23 UTC

...Thank you? Hehe, is it bad that I'm glad you're speechless?

*glues back the pieces of your heart*

Thanks for the comment and for reading :)

misskoum April 10 2010, 21:43:10 UTC

Oh, no! It's a very good thing! You have a lot of talent, tugging at my heartstrings the way you do. Brava!

africayellowcat April 10 2010, 21:41:57 UTC

Terrifying and beautiful at the same time. I actually always thought Penny was a Sagittarius, silly point huh in such a tragic tale.

split_the_ocean April 10 2010, 21:59:48 UTC

Thanks for the lovely comment! Heh, yeah Penny mentions that she's a Sagittarius at one point in the show (I think) so I just went with it. I'm glad you picked up on that detail :)

Oh and your icon? That is me right now, I literally have a blanket wrapped all around me, urgh I hate being sick, lol.

africayellowcat April 10 2010, 23:20:59 UTC

I know what you mean about the icon, every time I look at it I want to hug him! Gives you chicken soup and aspirin, feel better soon!