Road to Normalcy?

[spn_4eva]

Title: Road to Normalcy?
Characters: Sam, Dean
Word count: 3703 words
Summary: Sam and Dean hit the road. Original prompt for neonchica; on hoodie_time
Disclaimer: Still don't own them =(
Rating: Gen
Beta: Awesome si_star_x

Comments

[si_star_x]

I absolutely love this fic. I love the whole premise of it; Dean with MS and his brother who just wants to do the best by him. I've loved following it through from the first fic where we just got a view of their lives and struggles, and now for them to be here, getting out and seeing the world... it warms my heart. I adore that Dean didn't particularly want to go on this trip (because it would be so easy just to stagnate at home and let life pass him by), but went along because Sam wanted to. That was really sweet.

I thought the car scene was fantastic. My heart broke along with theirs when Dean's body failed him, but I thought it was really touching the way Sam was so concerned and then Dean just couldn't stop his outburst; everyone has to break sometime, huh? I thought it was fantastic imagery and I could totally picture Sam as he "let his hands ease the bruising grip on Dean’s arms and watched as Dean cradled his weak arm near his chest.".

Then it moved on to the other car scene, where Sam was helping Dean out of the Impala, and

[spn_4eva]

I know right! Dean has always done what Sam wanted him to do or how he wanted him to be, that's why I threw in the line where Sam asks Dean if HE wants to go. It jus breaks my heart to see Dean doing the best he can, even now when things have changed so much but he still is trying to do what he does best, being Sam's big brother

[si_star_x]

He still does a fantastic job at being the big brother, so he shouldn't worry too much about that. I think just being around pretty much gives him the role, and Sam's not going to take it away from him any time soon. Even when Sam's bossy you know he has Dean's best interests at heart. Aww. I love them both.

Haha, you definitely do seem to be better with unplanned scenarios! I think they were just the ones that showed Dean's vulnerability and the fact that at the end of the day, he has to accept help because he can't manage without it

[spn_4eva]

Dean is the best big brother there is. Of course I wouldn't know but still, in my opinion he's the only one I'd trust to save family =) I like Sam and how he can help and yet make it look like he's doing what Dean wants. So awesome ♥

Lol I should always write this randomly. Make it more awesome hehe. Dean needs to understand that asking help isn't that big of a deal especially from Sam. But in the end of the day, Dean is... well... Dean.

Usually we don't see Sam and Dean at their worst like Dean we've seen in the hospital dying or at the brink of death but not recovering from it like we try to write. And even Jensen and Jared said that the injuries shown are actually much less than what they should be like. So technically, we are on the right path =D hehe

Clothes, off, mhmm ♥

*coughneedtocompletethatparaficcough*

Lol that definitely needs to happen. I should get on it since I have my laptop back ♥