You are never happy with what you write!If you can only manage shorter chapters - is fine - as long as I can carry on reading :)
I like how you pay a lot of attention to small details (like the image of the charrred box having the original chestnut peeking through).. Likewise you include details like this:
**A steel box, about the size of a toolbox, sat in the trunk of the car. Inside it were garbage bags, some tied up to hide their contents, but one was empty, folded neatly and placed underneath the others. Assured that all was in check, Dean closed the box, latched it closed and made his way over to the razed building with it in his hand.**
You write it in a way to show how methodical Dean is..
So it wasn't such a bad chapter after all.. I always start reading with your warnings of *It's too short* and *It didn't turn out how it should* but you are too critical, love..I'm enjoying it..
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I like how you pay a lot of attention to small details (like the image of the charrred box having the original chestnut peeking through).. Likewise you include details like this:
**A steel box, about the size of a toolbox, sat in the trunk of the car. Inside it were garbage bags, some tied up to hide their contents, but one was empty, folded neatly and placed underneath the others. Assured that all was in check, Dean closed the box, latched it closed and made his way over to the razed building with it in his hand.**
You write it in a way to show how methodical Dean is..
So it wasn't such a bad chapter after all.. I always start reading with your warnings of *It's too short* and *It didn't turn out how it should* but you are too critical, love..I'm enjoying it..
Reading on...
Hugs
Julie
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I'm glad to hear that too.
it's a self-esteem thing.. but it's good to hear that darl <3
and you'll be happy to hear the muses are playing nice this evening. i like where this one's headed. even if it ends up short, I like it. lol
thanks 4 stickin with me when im in my whiney moods ^__^
♥~
Maxx
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