you and your eyes light the darkest room, for sweeteen_200 (Dean/Lisa, PG-13)

Sep 02, 2008 23:50

Title: you and your eyes light the darkest room
Author: that_september
Recipient: sweeteen_200
Rating: PG-13.
Pairing: Dean/Lisa.
Summary: Three times Lisa asked Dean to stay.
Author's Notes: Written for the prompt, “Stay.” Title taken from IKO’s song, Rosetta. I had a great time writing this-I hope it satisfies! ♥

Lisa always remembered the green first. )

rating: pg-13. pairing: dean/lisa

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iluvroadrunner6 September 3 2008, 04:47:23 UTC
Love. Just love. Dean/Lisa is right up there with one of my favorites and this was so them.

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that_september September 18 2008, 05:04:09 UTC
Thank you so much! I'm really glad you enjoyed it. ♥

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fonapola September 3 2008, 12:53:12 UTC
Oh loved it!

It would be so great for Dean to be able to go back to Lisa. They seemed so good together, even if it was fleeting.

Loved the focus on green eyes, and them being passed on to Ben.

Great job! Thank you very much :D

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that_september September 18 2008, 05:06:08 UTC
Oh, I'm so glad you liked it!

They seemed so good together, even if it was fleeting.

I totally agree. I really do hope she makes another appearance.

Anyway, thanks so much for your feedback. It was a fun prompt to work with. ♥

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twasadark September 4 2008, 03:05:30 UTC
Awwww! Sweet story! Love Ben in this, too.

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that_september September 18 2008, 05:06:23 UTC
Thank you so much!! ♥

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thehighwaywoman September 5 2008, 00:13:44 UTC
Hi! Just letting the author know that this has been rec'd here on this week's edition of crack_impala . :)

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snugduff September 5 2008, 01:22:25 UTC
That was sooo good, absolutely wonderful.
I kinda flailed like a loon at the end. :D

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that_september September 18 2008, 05:06:43 UTC
Awwwww. Thanks so much! :D

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