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Popping the comm cherry: WIP Concrit Requested

Dec 04, 2010 20:57

Title: Beach Time
Artist: serenada_art
Character/Pairing: Sam/Jess
Spoilers: None
Warning: None
Rating: PG

( Beach Time )

request: general, medium: traditional art, request: anatomy, rating: pg

Comments 4

anonymous December 5 2010, 09:16:57 UTC

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serenada_art December 6 2010, 00:35:36 UTC

Ugh. Not at all what I wanted to hear, but you are right, especially about the head size. Which means I need to start all over again.

I may end up cropping much of the legs out, because I'm having issues with height differences. As long as I can get the hands on the legs in.

Thanks!

anonymous December 6 2010, 01:39:48 UTC

NA, if you have a glass top maybe you can trace part of it onto a new piece of paper and start from there, I think you did a good job with Jess'torso.

anonymous December 6 2010, 04:37:53 UTC

I'm not doing any math on this, but just going by the eye, the one thing I notice the most is her forearm and leg are a little too thin, compared to the arm and thigh and the rest of her. I like her torso though. Anyway I did the whole drawing on top routine, but don't take me too seriously, I just went with my impressions.

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