original by dreamlittleyo

Oct 05, 2008 00:18

Remix Title: A Hand Reach Out to You (the Ever Coming Storm remix)
Remix Author: rivers_bend
Original Story: To Blow Against the Wind
Original Author: dreamlittleyo
Rating: R
Pairing: Sam/Dean
Summary: The more things change, the more they stay the same. Sam's always been there, just at arm's reach.

Taking Sam to school on his first day of kindergarten... )

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dreamlittleyo October 7 2008, 15:53:16 UTC
Oh! Oh oh OH! This is beautiful! So much more and better and perfect! I love how far back this reaches, the buildup through their entire lives to this place -- so much love and amazement, seeing such a quick snapshot of a story turned into something with real depth and tension and soul. I absolutely adore this!

Here, I'm a sucker for favorite lines, so have some *smile*:
He put a brave face on it, and was sitting seemingly patiently by the pump where he'd last seen the Impala, but for two months afterwards he wouldn't let Dean out of arm's reach ( ... )

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malcolm_stjay October 7 2008, 20:28:15 UTC
I really enjoyed this one! It was great how you looked back and took this moment, the kiss, and had the buildup start when they were kids. But like, in a non-pervy way.

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runedgirl October 8 2008, 00:38:58 UTC
Awwwwwwwwww. That makes so much *sense*. Thanks for this, it hit the spot :)

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lexii314 October 8 2008, 10:09:59 UTC
Every once in a while a piece of fic comes out that gives you a very warm and fuzzy feeling. Thank you so very much for it!!!! Because it tingles and makes me feel OH! so very good all over.
Very beautiful!!!!!

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tj_smartz October 8 2008, 14:45:11 UTC
Oh wow what a re-mix. dreamlittleyo's original fic is one of my favorite PDA stories (Sam's possessive hand in Dean's jeans pocket for two hours at the bar gets me each and every time) and this does it such justice. I love that you expanded it. Took it back to the roots, to them as children, as brothers. And how it grew from there. And how. I loved it all but these I just want to blow up, print out, thumb tack onto my wall so I can read them whenever I please:

and retreats into the bathroom where he stands under the shower long enough to wash the shame off his skin and back into his bones where he can carry it out of Sam's sight.

It feels like he's crawled inside Dean's chest and spread his arms wide, taking up all kinds of space Dean didn't even know was there for taking.

*love love love*

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tj_smartz October 15 2008, 13:21:31 UTC
Oh wow, Sarah. It was such a beautiful story. You did the best job and such a fitting piece to the original.

*loves on you* I'm ten kinds of excited that this was you. I bet dreamlittleyo is over the moon.

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