Fanfic - SPN/Oz: A Good Day (NC-17+, Slash: Schillinger/Dean, Schillinger/Sam)

[dendritejungle]

Title: A Good Day
Author: dendritejungle
Fandom: Supernatural/ Oz crossover
Characters: Sam Winchester/Dean Winchester/ Vern Schillinger
Word Count: ~ 4300 words.
Rating: NC-17 (R? X? Still a little fuzzy on this rating thing.)
Warnings/Spoilers: Slash, PWP, dubious-con, non-con, m/m rape, begging, bondage, branding, knifeplay, bit o’ blood; (very) mild

Comments

[hkath]

Oh my GOD. You have Schillinger DOWN. I believe every second of this - this is exactly how he would see them, it's exactly what he would do. Now I feel like... I want to see the rest of the brothers' Oz storyline play out!

[dendritejungle]

\o/ Thank you so much - you just made my evening! Aw, my first official fic comment ever... Was it good for you? It was great for me. I'm so glad you liked it. *grins like a maniac

[hkath]

They could definitely fuck him up in their own way. And yeah, I think Schillinger would blow their minds with how scary he can be. That's kind of right along the themes that Supernatural is exploring at the moment, which would make that sequel timely and pertinent!

I kind of got the impression that he was going to continue to make Sam's life hell, try to completely break him while Dean was out of commission.

I know how you feel. I find Oz fic totally daunting because the show is so complex and heavy and I feel like I can't quite go there myself. I feel a bit bad egging you on because I've written virtually none of it (two drabbles doesn't count). But! Your Schillinger voice is so strong!

[merihn]

Holy fuck.

...

HOly fuck.
Seriously. I never watched Oz. but... holy FUCK. You fucking did this PERFECTLY. I'm serious. You HAVE to write more fic. This was. Man. I am SO INDCOHERENT. Look at what you've done to me!
You got the brutality, the pain and frustration and defeat and the... gah. Everything. This was so painful to read... and shamefully hot.
HOLY.
♥

[dendritejungle]

*squeals with delight, blushes* <--- SRSLY. Ask my cat.

I was scared as fucking hell to post this, so I'm thrilled to bits that it worked so well for you. You have NO IDEA how happy and relieved that makes me, so THANK YOU, sweetie!

*fights the urge to cut out your comment and post it on my fridge, because that would be awkward to explain when my family comes to visit*

[merihn]

HEE! I love that it excited you that much.
I recced you on my journal. And usually I am far too lazy to do that, seriously... but this time, I just HAD to.

This fic was... like, I cringed alot, but you wrote it so well. I hope lots of people read it and like it too... and I really hope you write more. Please do.
Especially if you write the boys getting payback.

♥

[dendritejungle]

YOU RECCED ME?!?! Dude, I...there must be some word beyond honoured...maybe something in Japanese along the lines of "so honoured I could just commit hara-kiri on the spot"...? I don't have the words.

I cringed alot

You should have seen me WRITING it. I felt physically ill, but this story would not be be denied. I guess this is what people mean when they talk about the compulsion to write.

I really hope you write more. Please do. Especially if you write the boys getting payback.

Ooooh, part of me is sooo tempted. But man, this writing thing is exhausting. And time-consuming! I dunno how you and all the other awesome ficcers manage to do it on such a regular basis.

[donna_c_punk]

Whoa ... dude. This is SO what would've happened to them if they'd been in Oz.

Next fic? Bring in O'Reily (even though I hate him, he's a clever little fucker) and Beecher - they'd love to take a shot at Schillinger. Then there could be total Beecher/Sam sex.

[dendritejungle]

This is SO what would've happened to them if they'd been in Oz.

*nods* Thank you! Yeah, I think that's why it flowed so easily. It just kind of wrote itself.

Bring in O'Reily

Heh, you are not the first person to mention bringing in O'Reily. Can you imagine him pairing up with Dean to take down Schillinger, both driven by rage at what he'd done to their little brothers? *swoons*

Beecher/Sam sex FTW! Turning to each other for comfort - and/or to get revenge Schillinger. Oh GOD, the plot bunnies...I'm getting dizzy...

[audreyovisual]

Wow. I haven't seen OZ either but I hear Schillinger is vile, as he demonstrates so well here.

That's some piece of writing for something you dashed off in less than a day. Damn!

I'd be fascinated to see what you could do with a sequel.

Interesting to get this POV. Would a sequel be from Schillinger's POV as well?

[dendritejungle]

YOU, madame, get all the brownie points for handholding me on this for the last week. *is slavishly grateful*

Re. POV: It's interesting, the story just came into my head through Schillinger's eyes. There was no question in my mind from the get-go that this would be his story. And I really do find him easier to write than Sam or Dean. I find the Winchester boys hard (heh): they're just so complex, I'm not sure I could do a story from their POV justice. On the other hand, an external POV makes exploring some of Sam and Dean's internal struggles that would come out of this story much more difficult to explore.

[jackiesjunkie]

I didn't think it was possible for my hatred of Schillinger to grow but it has. You did an amazing job of writing his character. I'd love to see you bring in more of the Oz guys to help Dean and Sam get back at him.

[dendritejungle]

I didn't think it was possible for my hatred of Schillinger to grow but it has. You did an amazing job of writing his character.

Thanks...I think? *grins wryly* I'm still a little creeped out that I apparently channel such an inhumanly terrifying man quite so well.

I'd love to see you bring in more of the Oz guys to help Dean and Sam get back at him.

You're not alone. I just wish it didn't involve all that pesky characterization and plot and actual writing... ;P