An Apple a Day 3/6

Feb 23, 2010 17:24

Disclaimer: I own nothing, except a pair of Spock ears.
Rating: PG13 - mild adult themes
A/N: This takes place after the TOS episode "The Apple". It will go up to NC17 rating at chapters 4 and 5. UK spelling :-)

3. NyotaThe first four hours with Spock passed in warm companionship. They played a couple of chess matches, drank tea and Nyota ( Read more... )

spock, nyota, pg13, star trek tos, uhura, romance

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wyntreaurora February 23 2010, 17:56:09 UTC
The UST is killing me! haha But I really like what you've done with this set-up, it's not just a sudden realization for the both of them that "hey, I want you" and they kiss and get naked. Ok, ok, Spock's injured and they couldn't anyway, but still, he's fighting it (OBVIOUSLY) and so is she, and I've always sort of figured that if they didn't come to the Enterprise as an already established couple, that's how it would have to go down - they'd have to struggle with it a little first. And seriously, LOVE the whole TLC idea to force them together :D Human males are bad enough about being taken care of when they're sick b/c they want to appear tough and such, but secretly they all love it, and we know they do, so I can only imagine that a Vulcan is at least twice as bad with all their emotion-stuffing, and Spock? Well shoot, he's got both sets of genes so he's probably utterly ridiculous when it comes to that sort of thing, so it's really amusing to watch him slowly give in (I bet the painkillers help tho ;) ). Good stuff, looking ( ... )

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spockchick February 23 2010, 20:59:35 UTC
Thanks so much, I see them both as mature personalities, so they wouldn't jump, and Nyota sees Spock as unnatainable. I think although there is mutual attraction, neither one can bring themselves to think it will ever be a possibility.

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yalegirl03 February 23 2010, 19:04:59 UTC
Oh my goodness. This chapter was deepfried in awesome. Then dunked in awesomesauce and sprinkled with powdered awesome. (Sorry--the mocha I just finished made me a little excitable.) I love love love this chapter. I adore TOS S/U and you wrote them both so well here.

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spockchick February 23 2010, 21:01:44 UTC
You have that mocha more often! Are you a Vulcan? Thanks very much, I really hope it wasn't too sad after the tone of the start. I think Uhura is a very kind soul, and would help anyone, rather like Spock actually.

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shighola February 23 2010, 20:41:48 UTC
I am loving this so much, but I'm starting to wonder what exactly Bones shot Spock full of. He's awfully talky all of a sudden! :)

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spockchick February 23 2010, 21:04:21 UTC
Thanks! I don't think it was anything bad, but Spock is not used to painkillers, he usually does his trance, but he is a bit broken just now so not fully functioning, and I think stress and especially lack of sleep makes folks more OOC, even Vulcans.

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clar1208 February 23 2010, 22:04:13 UTC
I just love this story. Your Spock and Nyota are a reminder of why I loved them on TOS. So much grace and dignity. And that UST is so thick you would need a phaser to cut through it. I look forward to the next installment.

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spockchick February 24 2010, 09:13:48 UTC
Thank you very much, I have been a fan since the 70's when I watched re-runs with my Dad. The UST balloon is well and truly burst next though :-)

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gerriv February 23 2010, 22:21:17 UTC
Great chapter! At least now they are finally in bed together LOL!

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spockchick February 24 2010, 08:17:18 UTC
It's about to get steamy....

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