Your servant, don't forsake him

Apr 05, 2010 22:08

Disclaimer: I own nothing. Paramount owns it all.
Pairing: Spock/Uhura
Rating: NC17
A/N: This was in response to an ejectingthecore prompt for Boot!Smut. Not strongly explicit. Can be ST2009 but is TOS in my mind.

Your servant, don't forsake himHe has his ceremonial customs, and she has hers. With solemnity, she lays out her requirements by candle light, ( Read more... )

spock, boots, nc17, uhura, star trek

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spockchick April 6 2010, 07:58:52 UTC
Thanks, I am liking doing prompts just now for some reason, second in a week! I'm very glad you liked it.

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geriatricfool April 6 2010, 10:45:54 UTC
Like the others, I wondered how you knew all that stuff - I was in awe of the detail! But so beautiful and so sensual and unbelievably sexy. Those last few lines. And one of the most incredible parts was the thought of him coming back and finishing off the boots. Ooo, wow! Thank you! What was your other prompt - did I miss it?

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spockchick April 6 2010, 11:39:32 UTC
Thanks G! I did have to do a wee bit of research. I thought Uhura would do the sensual boot bit, and Spock, being, stonger & faster would do a manly brush at the end! The other prompt was a film anniversary prompt from tftspockside, a Chekov story, the entry before this, but I think you may have read it :-)

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nubianamazon April 6 2010, 18:48:56 UTC
Wow I loved this. You really painted a picture. Sensually poetic and there is a stillness that I really enjoyed.Well done.

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spockchick April 6 2010, 20:30:23 UTC
Thank you so much. I was a bit worried it was *too* descriptive, so I'm pleased you thought it painted a picture. Thank you.

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zizi_west April 7 2010, 06:04:01 UTC
Wonderful vignette! I really like the description of the process, and her sense of concentration and anticipation. I agree with other posters -- it's easy to imagine Uhura planning a very warm welcome for Spock when he returns. The approach you took is unusual (at least it seems to be among the TOS fanfic I've read)-- caring for the belongings of the beloved as an extension of touching and caring for the body of the beloved person, a sort of meta-foreplay. The mood is hypnotic & sensual.

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spockchick April 7 2010, 09:00:12 UTC
Wow Zizi, what a lovely review, I am so thankful for your encouragement, I wanted a "less is more" approach and worried it was a bit too "less". Thank you.

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The Ritual spocklikescats April 8 2010, 09:18:06 UTC
Wow, that took me back to the ritual of shining my oxfords before inspection when I was in the service! I never heard about the rubbing alcohol. That must be a more recent development. We always used spit [yes, really!] or water with thin layers of polish, and finished up by burnishing with a nylon stocking.

Of course, this vignette is ever so sexy, because they are TOS Spock's lovely form-fitting boots, and you mention the formation of the leather to his feet, and the texture and the scent of the boots. Verrrry nice.

Hmmm. Now maybe Spock returns the favor?

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Re: The Ritual spockchick April 8 2010, 09:32:20 UTC
Hi you :-) Thanks ever so! Yes, usually it is spit or water as you know, but in one Military site it said some prefer rubbing alcohol, which gave me opportunity for another "prop". If only I had known about the stocking - sigh... I shall have to think of Spock returning the favour... Thanks again x

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