Second Challenge: Halo - Beyonce #8

Jun 19, 2009 18:07


Halo - Beyonce #8

Characters: Spock/Uhura
Spoilers: only for those who haven't seen the movie
Rating: G
Word Count: 226

Special thanks to beta jncar for suggestions

He plays the moment in his mind, wondering why he hadn't said more.

What do you need?

Why couldn't he have just told her? I need you...I need you to hold me, I need you to promise me you will ( Read more... )

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uhurafan June 19 2009, 23:39:25 UTC
OK I know I posted this wrong but this is my absolute first post so any help on what I did wrong would be greatly appreciated.

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2bluaeryn June 20 2009, 02:24:28 UTC
nice

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uhurafan June 20 2009, 02:31:03 UTC
thank you I was a little nervous since this was my first stab ever at writing.

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bana05 June 20 2009, 14:39:45 UTC
This was very visual and tender. Great job!

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uhurafan June 21 2009, 03:10:22 UTC
Thank you so much!

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fishphile June 22 2009, 22:24:21 UTC
That was good. It was excellent from Spock's pov.

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uhurafan June 22 2009, 23:52:54 UTC
You don't know how much I appreciate that!

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