Fic: Autumn

[spoons1899]

Title: Autumn
Characters/Pairing: Sam, Dean, Sam/OFC
Rating: PG
Word Count: ~5,000
Summary: Sam meets a girl at school and gets a taste of an entirely different kind of family life, one that makes him start to question his own. Pre-series.

Comments

[hsifeng]

...and Sam always hates it when Dad’s words come out of Dean’s mouth.

This. The essence of all things Winchester and all the ways they deal with each other. Your story is amazing, hear warming and heart breaking all at the same time. Thank you for sharing!

[spoons1899]

Thank you! I particularly liked that line, I'm glad it was noticed :)

[sandymg]

Sad and lyrical. Beautifully done.

[spoons1899]

Thank you!

[saberivojo]

What a beautiful, haunting fic. I love this all. Loved young Sam and his first love with all the innocence that comes with it.

This whole fic was gorgeous, it makes me want to re-read but out loud, so the words can trip off my tongue.

Sam is stretched thin like the gossamer strands of the spider web spread across his dirty bedroom window.

Just perfect. Thanks so much for posting.

[harrigan]

This is soooo good! You've done an amazing (and very rare) job of showing how Sam is drawn to the other side, but still feels the pull of Sam's Life, too.

Whenever I watch the SPN ep where the boys go to heaven, I have to say, I will replace that Thanksgiving memory with this one!

[bowtrunckle]

This is just beautiful. I love your OC and Sam is just spot on perfect with his push-pull feelings about what he wants and what he needs.

But then Dean crowds past him and Dean turns on the light and Dean swears and trips over a table leg and Dean says, “Come on Sammy, you gonna stand out there all night?” and Dean drags him in by the arm and Dean is everywhere and everything. Sam feels a hot rush of guilt for picturing all night what it’d be like to have more siblings. Dean is everyone, any more of him and the world might explode.

That was a gorgeous paragraph with such a lovely cadence and words that are so true.