I loved it dear, except I think you forgot to post the rest of it...
But really. The tension and build up here was fabulous, and I almost squealed at the impromptu Coney Island field trip, because it's such a crazy little moment in time for them to have. I said this earlier about the fic bright-lights28 posted (you two didn't plan to hit the fandom with angsty get-together-during-epic-tour-moments fics on the same day, did you?), but reading fic set back then, but written now with the full weight of what's yet to come for these guys... You just want to cling to them and tell them to hang in there.
(Also, that scene in the hotel room near the end there... GUH, it's just so vivid, and their desperation is so real, and the way it's just left hanging and unresolved and they both just know it has to be that way...)
I loved reading this. Especially the drunk Kris and Adam parts were priceless. And the angst was so good I decided to scrap whatever I have on my angsty futurefic WIP and start over. (That's a good thing.)
The yearning, confusion, desperation... it all works wonderfully. Great job.
aww thanks so much for deciding to add to your feedback! & it's so flattering to hear that my writing made someone else think about theirs, wow. & the ending was hard to write, ngl, but yes drunk!kradam were incredibly fun to write :) thank you so much <3
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it's 3 in the morning and i should be ~asleep but omg
omg
but so good omg
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It's almost 4am, so I'm sorry for not leaving a more coherent comment. But great job. :D
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But really. The tension and build up here was fabulous, and I almost squealed at the impromptu Coney Island field trip, because it's such a crazy little moment in time for them to have. I said this earlier about the fic bright-lights28 posted (you two didn't plan to hit the fandom with angsty get-together-during-epic-tour-moments fics on the same day, did you?), but reading fic set back then, but written now with the full weight of what's yet to come for these guys... You just want to cling to them and tell them to hang in there.
(Also, that scene in the hotel room near the end there... GUH, it's just so vivid, and their desperation is so real, and the way it's just left hanging and unresolved and they both just know it has to be that way...)
Brilliant. All around, brilliant.
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I loved reading this. Especially the drunk Kris and Adam parts were priceless. And the angst was so good I decided to scrap whatever I have on my angsty futurefic WIP and start over. (That's a good thing.)
The yearning, confusion, desperation... it all works wonderfully. Great job.
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i loved this.
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