I don't have to tell you anymore that I like your stories. Your characters are very real, I could punch Seth into the eye and I like the Ryan/Luke friendship. If only Kirsten would care a little more. And please, don't torture Ryan to much. Thank you for the update.
Great chapter. My heart bleeds for Ryan, he tries so hard to be good at everything, and please everyone,and also be there for everyone. He is so good at hiding his own pain.. so well written.
Sorry this has taken a while but your chapters are so long and so good that I put them aside until I can find some spare time to sit and enjoy them. I'd rather not do it on the fly.
You have me seriously worried about Ryan. You've captured well the way he puts everyone else's needs first even to the detriment of his own health. It' so sad that his level of self worth is so low.
I hope we don't have to wait too long for the next installment. Cliff hangers ARE evil!!
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I hope Ch 5 is not far away?
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You have me seriously worried about Ryan. You've captured well the way he puts everyone else's needs first even to the detriment of his own health. It' so sad that his level of self worth is so low.
I hope we don't have to wait too long for the next installment. Cliff hangers ARE evil!!
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