Drabble - It's More than That

[sportysmurf]

Comments

[sofiemae]

This is good...you really put me there. :)

[sportysmurf]

Thanks! Although, I'm not sure I'd want to be in that position, I'm glad you understood.

[widget007]

*hugs* wow ... very awesome!!! You realy, really gots me pondering various fandoms with this one!!! Good job! *grins*

[sportysmurf]

:) Took some prodding to post something a little less happy but a little more true to life than fluffy happy bunnies.

[widget007]

heh, I'm glad the prodding worked! *grins* And this really works too, hon! *hugs*

[yellowsmurf6]

As I said before, I love how you were able to pack so much punch into such a short story. The emotion is very potent, and very well done. Excellent job with this one. Hope this means the muse is back! :D

[sportysmurf]

Don't know if the muse is back, but this is what she brought, thanks so much for helping me out with it!

[yellowsmurf6]

You're most welcome. You always know where to find me if you ever need a smurfing hand. :D

[syrensoul_red]

Awesomesauce, Sporty. I love both the emotion and the sentiment of the piece.

Keep going please?

x

[sportysmurf]

Hey thanks for reading and glad you liked! No plans to continue this one (too angsty and I can't pick a pairing!) but I have three other works in progress that need updating love. And of course I started something entirely new last night... *sigh*

[demeter94]

Love this. Very deep, kind of sad. Sure that's Lindsay and Cindy we're talking about in a universe where Lindsay officially is still with an oblivious Jill. *nods to self* :D

[sportysmurf]

I flip-flopped between every pairing I could think of - then I decided to leave it up to the reader because to me it will always be Lindsay not leaving someone.

Although, I kind of think that what might eventually come in your line of thought, is that Jill (who isn't really oblivious to much) would let Lindsay go because watching someone be miserable with you really kind of sucks.