Part Four

[spotsycool]

Final Part:

Comments

[elmey]

Very nicely done--what a difficult situation you put them in! I like the way you kept up the tension throughout the story, and let us see how much the two men mean to each other. This was a great start--you should definitely write more :)

[elmey]

I forgot: I'm doing tonight's newletter for periwinkle: do you want me to list this story? (It doesn't show up on the normal newsletter feed, but since it's not locked I can include it if you like)

[spotsycool]

Sure, if you'd like. :) Thanks!

[spotsycool]

Thank you! I'm happy that you enjoyed it. :)
And thank you, I will definitely write more. :D
Thanks for reading and commenting!

[eilidhsd]

Well plotted, and well written; is there to be a sequel?

[spotsycool]

Thank you! :)
Well, I'm considering it. I just hope that I can write a sequel to this story...up to now, writing a second part to this story didn't even cross my mind! But several of the cousins have mentioned it, so... it's a possibility. :)
Thanks so much for reading!

[vysila]

What a nicely done story, plotty, angsty, good characterization. I'm impressed and hope we see more fic from you in the future.Congrats on your first fic!

[spotsycool]

Hey, there! :)
Thank you! I'm delighted that you liked it! Means a lot. :)