'Nightly' [Hermione/Ginny] NC-17

[sprawling_song]

Fandom: Harry Potter (I do write non HP things, although it must seem like I don't. Maybe I'll post one some day.)
Genre: femslash, smut
Title: Nightly
Pairing: Hermione/Ginny
Warnings: explicit sex of f/f variety
Word count: 1070
A/N: This is my first time writing smut in a concerted way rather than just random jottings. If there's one thing I

Comments

[hamimifk]

I was wandering through and saw this fic. I don't usually read Hermione/Ginny stuff (because they're a bit overdone, I guess, or I'm just too stuck on Hermione/Pansy) but I really liked this fic. Some minor spelling errors, but I liked your style. So... ^_^ More please!

[sprawling_song]

Thank you very much!
Oh god, spelling errors? That's terrible! :( Please point them out. I apologise.

[hamimifk]

^-^ Welcome.
Oh, not that bad. ^^; I was a little distracting while reading it last night, but I reread it just now (I think it was even better the second time XD ) and only spotted one spelling error:

"Thrust up suddenly, she feels a sheet of hair fall down over her face and neck."

The word 'Thrust' should be 'Thrusting'. ._. Unless that was intentional?

[sprawling_song]

Oh, that was intentional. The idea was "She is thrust up suddenly, and feels a sheet of hair fall". Sorry if that was unclear or disrupted your flow :)