The city had its own song, a random percussion of car horns and yelps � everyone looked so tiny. It helped Tezuka regain a sense of perspective. He came here to think � even if thinking took him down the same path nightly.
Two weeks earlier, they�d buried his grandfather. Tezuka had insisted on saying something at the service; he�d prepared the speech for days, but the words dried and stuck in his throat. His mother�s eyes were damp � it was all he could see, and he�d frozen to the spot. His father had ushered him down, a hand around his back � a squeeze of his shoulder. It still felt like a squeeze of disappointment.
^ That's a sort of example of how it's displaying for me. It might just be my computer, but I wondered. @_@
dear my lovelylovelylovely anonymous writer ... ♥♥♥♥♥ for you. i don't have chance to read this right now .. i'll read this tonight ♥ i still at work, and if possible i wanna skip, you know that, ahahhaha~~ XD sjfdgajeh/legalrefkj ^__________^*is very happy* ♥
Dear my *cough*anon*cough* writer... I have suspicion who you are..but i save it for later *wink* Some points I looovee X3 :
1. I did word count ... 17,994 words *whistle* omg you really serious....!!*squish* ♥
2. I enjoyed their conversation so much. And the humour ♥
3. Good job with Oshitari (lawyer?!XD) and the Hyoutei bits. I adore Atobe and Oshitari friendship :D :D :D
4. FERRARI! ♥ Atobe and Tez in a ferrari ... XD
5. Atobe imagined him in Italy: brown skin and white shirt; sunglasses pushed up into his hair; sipping beer on a balcony, in an apartment that overlooked the city. ... I have pretty mental image. Mm.. yummy Tez ♥XDXD
6. Atobe shrugged, grinning widely. Water glittered on his stomach. His jeans were wet and clinging, drawn down slightly. Tezuka stole a brief glance at his hipbones, sharp angles he couldn't help but be attracted to.*drools* I like sharp hipbones... X3
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Muaw, Atozuka fanfic, finally!*__* I love this fanfic! And I also love the nickname "Kitten" for Tezuka^^ Atobe: ...mm, kitty kitty, come to your master... Tezuka:...no
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Loved the fic. You can tell a lot of hard work went into it. Beautiful.
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Two weeks earlier, they�d buried his grandfather. Tezuka had insisted on saying something at the service; he�d prepared the speech for days, but the words dried and stuck in his throat. His mother�s eyes were damp � it was all he could see, and he�d frozen to the spot. His father had ushered him down, a hand around his back � a squeeze of his shoulder. It still felt like a squeeze of disappointment.
^ That's a sort of example of how it's displaying for me. It might just be my computer, but I wondered. @_@
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♥♥♥♥♥ for you. i don't have chance to read this right now .. i'll read this tonight ♥
i still at work, and if possible i wanna skip, you know that, ahahhaha~~ XD
sjfdgajeh/legalrefkj ^__________^*is very happy*
♥
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Some points I looovee X3 :
1. I did word count ... 17,994 words *whistle* omg you really serious....!!*squish* ♥
2. I enjoyed their conversation so much. And the humour ♥
3. Good job with Oshitari (lawyer?!XD) and the Hyoutei bits. I adore Atobe and Oshitari friendship :D :D :D
4. FERRARI! ♥ Atobe and Tez in a ferrari ... XD
5. Atobe imagined him in Italy: brown skin and white shirt; sunglasses pushed up into his hair; sipping beer on a balcony, in an apartment that overlooked the city.
... I have pretty mental image. Mm.. yummy Tez ♥XDXD
6. Atobe shrugged, grinning widely. Water glittered on his stomach. His jeans were wet and clinging, drawn down slightly. Tezuka stole a brief glance at his hipbones, sharp angles he couldn't help but be attracted to.*drools* I like sharp hipbones... X3 ( ... )
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I love this fanfic! And I also love the nickname "Kitten" for Tezuka^^
Atobe: ...mm, kitty kitty, come to your master...
Tezuka:...no
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