Comments | spring_fluff: Happy spring <strong class="lj-user"><a href="/read/user/shinichirouwaya">shinichirouwaya</a></strong>!

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Happy spring shinichirouwaya!

Apr 29, 2007 15:40

Title: Damage Control
Recipient's name: shinichirouwaya
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Momoshiro/Kaidoh
A/N: Fitting the request for something built on manga canon was a fun challenge, so thank you for that! Some quotes lifted directly from manga translations.

( Happy spring shinichirouwaya! )

Comments 10

mousapelli April 29 2007, 20:14:27 UTC

i mean, great fic ♥

prillalar April 29 2007, 20:26:40 UTC

Oh, so much love! Tennis and the sewing kit and more boyishness than you can shake a stick at. And referencing the Best Manga Panel Ever. The whole story was really smooth and yummy.

Also tea-party throwing younger sisters. ♥

sivullinen April 29 2007, 20:56:58 UTC

ASLDALKFJSFLKJSDFS.

It's too bad I was reading this so late at night, because it meant I couldn't CACKLE MANIACALLY at all the best parts! Which were many. KAIDOH THE SPY. MOMO'S GIRL EXPERIENCE. BARBIES. MOMO BEING ZEN OMG I DIED.

Was Kaidoh's schedule now so tight that he had to schedule fights with Momo? Honestly, he was a little touched. He could do that, if that's what Kaidoh wanted.

Yeaaah.

This kiss was longer, and better centered, and better in general, which Momo knew was obviously because he'd kissed Kaidoh this time, not the other way around.

Obviously. *cough*

♥ ♥ ♥

shinichirouwaya April 29 2007, 21:27:51 UTC

Wow. yeah.

So let's see.. when I first opened up my friends page and noticed that my present had been posted here.. I was a little disappointed that it was another MomoKai (since I think there were about 5 other MomoKai gifts for spring fluff, even though it was one of my requested pairings..). I started reading and realized that I was an idiot for thinking that there was too much MomoKai and for thinking that I didn't want to read MomoKai as much anymore.

This fic totally went beyond what I was expecting, I felt that it took the normal UST relationship between Momo and Kaidoh (in fics) and enhanced it so much more. The whole relationship that developed between the two was just so greatly written and well.. developed ^0^. And I love that you fit it into the manga plot so well.

This was definitely the best gift someone could have ever given to me. There is nothing more I could have asked for. Thank you. ♥.

aiwritingfic April 30 2007, 01:50:53 UTC

Very well written and I loved the reminder of the Tezuka-Oishi match. <3