some editation!tovaloreandeSeptember 11 2004, 20:04:03 UTC
yea i'm not like a song writer or anything just some suggestions, its ok if you dont like them, etc. :)
Let's go on with my life, (maybe Let me go on with my life.. cuz that sounds weird.. or maybe lets go on with our lifes.. or something.. ) Harder and hard it gets,(maybe... harder and harder it gets?)
Why think about this?(it) Why face the problem? It's so clear to everyone else, It's not so clear to me (maybe say something else here, like, it's so clear to everyone else, so why cant i see.. or something..)
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Let's go on with my life, (maybe Let me go on with my life.. cuz that sounds weird.. or maybe lets go on with our lifes.. or something.. )
Harder and hard it gets,(maybe... harder and harder it gets?)
Why think about this?(it)
Why face the problem?
It's so clear to everyone else,
It's not so clear to me (maybe say something else here, like, it's so clear to everyone else, so why cant i see.. or something..)
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hmm, i'll think about the rest
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