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sprout19

Fic: To Bring You Back (2/?)

Nov 02, 2008 18:13

Title: To Bring You Back

Characters/Pairing: 10/Rose, Mickey, Reinette

Rating: PG

Disclaimer: Not mine, just playing ^-^

Spoilers: Only for GitF and before

Genre: Angst, Hurt/Comfort, Romance, Sci-fi

Summary: The Doctor, Rose and Mickey visit a desert planet and discover a thing or two about the resourcefulness of the Manima… though with an addition to ( Read more... )

fanfic, doctor who, to bring you back

Comments 6

salimali November 2 2008, 09:14:43 UTC

Another great chapter, I love the way you have the characters emotions on a slow burn, but this...

""Especially the two girls. His family loved him for his talents. His mother was proud of him. He was so good at finding nice people, ultimately making their town a nicer place to be. He was nothing if not resourceful.""

ooh I'm worried now, Grav isn't as innocent as first thought is he?!?!

Update soon x x

PS- Good Luck with your exam *hugs and good wishes*

sprout19 November 4 2008, 08:52:36 UTC

Thanks ^-^, I dont want to rush the emotions but sometimes I'm worried it drags a bit because it gets too slow so I'm glad it sounds like I'm not doing that yet ^-^

And you're a smart cookie (I have cookies on the brain, sorry ^-^) - well, Grav is... interesting... he has his own agenda but he's a little boy so it can't be held against him too much... his parents however...

And thanks so much for the luck! I think it reached me because the exam went quite well so thank you *hugs* ^-^

lostwolfchats November 2 2008, 14:35:54 UTC

oo - lovely... and Ten is an idiot!!!!!!!!!! I want to slap him, violently, about the head.

sprout19 November 4 2008, 08:56:46 UTC

Hehe thank you! - I have to admit I squealed just a little bit when I saw that you'd reviewed ^-^... and yes, I frequently have the urge to slap Ten... amongst other things ^-^

arwentheta November 3 2008, 06:43:18 UTC

Ten deserves a lot of slapping for this. And maybe a kick in the butt. And then a hug, some chocolates and maybe a kiss once he lets her. the other one, go back to the era that she belongs to.

Men can be so oblivious sometimes... they can be with the love of their lives and only view them as their best friends. Bummer!

sprout19 November 4 2008, 08:59:47 UTC

Thanks ^-^ - aww poor Ten, everyone wants to slap him at the moment, I'm being quite mean to him really, inspiring all this violence against him ^-^

And wouldnt the series be so much better if Ten had viewed Rose as more than a friend - unfortunately his obliviousness seems to be the basis of their relationship ^-^