Fic: The Art of Breathing

[sprout19]

Title: The Art of Breathing
Pairing: MerlinxArthur
Rating: G
Warning: Slash
Summary: Merlin’s hurting and confused and he can’t find the space to just breathe. Out in the rain there’s only really one person who can help. Fluffy, h/c, Arthur/Merlin oneshot.
Word Count: 2298
Disclaimer: not mine, just playing ^-^

Comments

[sprout19]

Aw thanks!!! (Well, at least I hope that means you liked it ^^)
Love the hyperly dancing mario btw ^^
x

[hermitknut]

This is a lovely piece. Don't worry about the ending! It's nice that it cuts off there, there's no real need for anything more. Really nicely written. :)
HK

[sprout19]

Thank you! And I'm glad the ending's okay too, I'm notoriously slow with updating so at least I'm not keeping anyone waiting with this one ^^
Thanks so much!

[xmarie08]

Lovely! Beautiful imagery. And wet!boys FTW ;)

[sprout19]

Thanks!! I like to think I dont trample all over the line between good imagery and rambling but I often worry about it so thank you for saying that ^^ (and their gorgeous all the time but dripping wet and cuddling? I didnt think there would be any objections ^^)
Thanks!

[archaeologist_d]

It was lovely. The abrupt ending was fine. It had closure and really brought out the title very well. I liked that Arthur went after Merlin and finally figured out what was wrong.

[sprout19]

Thank you! And its always good when Arthur finally figures things out (and lots of cuddling ensues ^^)

[fatchickengirl]

Sensual!

[sprout19]

Hehe, I should hope so (the best fics with these two always are ^^)
Thanks!