From the comments I am not up to writing this chapter, I stuffed up. Sorry. I will whipe the slate clean and leave it for someone else who can write to do it.
It's nice... but it seems a little fast. And it's not really anything like the first chapter. It seems like it's a great story, but it would be much better on it's own. William isn't himself and nither is Buffy. They're not really the same characters.
I don't know maybe its just me but I think the chapter fit in perfectly with the last one. Maybe them getting together was a little rushed but thats how it always is with them. What is this about a meek william? I reread the first chapter just to make sure I wasn't hallucinating and in the very first part he's taking of his nailpolish and saying his hand looks naked with out his rings. How is that a meek william? So he's polite at the office that doen'st make him meek. Well, jsut wanted to say I liked the chapter! : )
Ok just so that no one thinks I am overreacting. I can handle criticism. I have nothing against what people have said here. However it has been the stuff that I have received in my in-box through my e-mail that has gotten to me. I was under the impression that this was a place for writers to come together which is what I was attempting to do. I did no know that you had to be "Accepted" by certain members of this group. I have decided that I will not partake in a group where members feel that it is their right to flame other authors. You want to take me down, fine do it here so that everyone can see. I will and would have taken it. So you didn't like my chapter fine, not to everyones taste I get that, you figure that I am "a simpleton to forgot to read the first chapter" or that I am "a try hard porn writer who went for the cheap shot", fine. But let the whole group/community know that. I will not be posting here again. Sorry to the people who have made this group fantastic again a few have spoiled it for me. Hopefully
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I'm going to respond to all of these ok? ;) I'm going to be honest with you. 100% (don't be afraid). As a community things aren't going very well. Our mods, even though I love them dearly aren't responding to emails or comments. Someone else wanted to write this chapter and she wasn't given permission, so she didn't. Bad vibes are coming from that. But you were the only one to post a chapter so what can we say? (other than bad mods?) I wrote the first chapter and no one responded for so long that I didn't even know if anyone liked it and from the comments you were getting my feelings were getting hurt. (which is nothing new, let me tell you) I was getting the idea that people truly hated my characters and that they perfered yours better. Which is fine but dude, I wrote the first chapter *whine* So what am I getting at? We had another dropout yesterday and I don't want two. I feel horrible but I'm also kinda proud that everyone spoke their opinions (even if they were wussy and Anonymous, but I understand the non-LJers
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I'm stalking this whole thing and rereading this post, because I skimmed it the first time and saw that you were leaving and I freaked out...sorry. ;) It really bothers me that you were emailed something like that. Name calling is never good. I'm really sorry. I wish they would have posted here, I know people would've defended you.
Ummm....Ok first off let me say how sad I am to see that someone has sent such mean and awful comments to our authors. We're doing this for fun and for others to enjoy not to be ridiculed and made fun of
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I love how you put Spike back in his...Spikeness; and that Buffy lost control by surprise. I think this stor is finally getting started!
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Anyone know who's going next?
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Maybe I'm crazy, but that's how it seemed to me.
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