Bones fanfic: Rain

May 02, 2008 21:01

Title: Rain
Pairing: Booth/Brennan
Spoilers: The Glowing Bones In The Old Stone House
Rating: PG-13
Summary: he couldn’t sleep because of the unspoken conversation he had in his mind and the awareness of her oblivion to them.
Word count: 1,717

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buffyangellvr23 May 3 2008, 03:28:49 UTC
awww poor Booth :( Can I make him feel better? hehe

nice job:)

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spy_barbie May 4 2008, 15:58:23 UTC
hahahaha, i'm sure he won't mind ;)

thanks for replying!

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sb158 May 3 2008, 21:34:52 UTC
Awww...bummer. It was a sweet dream, but how disappointing to wake up on the couch.

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spy_barbie May 4 2008, 15:58:50 UTC
well, yeah. but this one was meant to be sad :)

thanks for replying!

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habita May 14 2008, 13:30:51 UTC
So beautiful story! ^^ Loved it! My favs:

"But he had already bought Brennan flowers"
That´s so sweet that he gave her daffodils for her birthday! And I really love your description of the fact that Booth have done all those things that he would do with any other woman, but that it is all different when it comes to Brennan. Like she is not just another woman and can´t be courted traditionally. Or that maybe he simply cannot court her that way because their relationship is already a lot more. I think I´m not explainning myself at all! lol.

"He pondered on the delighted look on her face when he took the first bite of her macarroni and cheese just to tell her how good it was"
Oh! I LOVED that moment in the ep! ^^ I always think of it as a date, I don´t care what they say! lol.

I loved how you described Booth thinking of Brennan, then. It was beautiful, how he recalls her smiles, her laughter and how he wishes more of that intimacy. I really adore your way of telling things. It seems so beautiful when you write it! :-)

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spy_barbie May 14 2008, 21:27:36 UTC
awww, you write the best feedbacks, thank you! thanks for reading and for taking your time to post. :D

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habita May 14 2008, 22:11:19 UTC
It´s a pleasure :-)

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