Bones fanfic: Escapades (2/10)

Jun 08, 2008 22:40

Title: Escapades (2/10)
Pairing: Booth/Brennan
Spoilers: none
Rating: NC-17
Summary:She knew the moment she laid her eyes on him that he had the same thoughts she had on her mind
Word count: 3,274

Prompts by mem_vermelha: standing up, panties and jealousy; place: consctruction site

Huge thanks to crearealidad for the beta services, ideas, support and laughs late at ( Read more... )

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micksvamptramp June 9 2008, 18:49:40 UTC
let me know when THIS episode airs!!!!!!!!!!

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spy_barbie June 10 2008, 03:27:56 UTC
hahahaha, sure thing! thanks for reading!

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katethegater June 9 2008, 20:48:10 UTC
oooh boy!

lovin' the outdoor nookie-ness!

;-)

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spy_barbie June 10 2008, 03:28:33 UTC
thanks! and get ready for more! :)

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a_h_c June 10 2008, 15:29:38 UTC
Oooo -- hot! I'm glad you've turned this into a series. I could totally see Brennan trying to explain away her jealousy using anthropological reasons and Booth losing patience with it. I'm looking forward to reading the rest.

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habita July 13 2008, 20:49:07 UTC
Hi Lucy! I´m so sorry it took me so long to review :-( And this is going to be a short comment, I´m afraid, but I felt so guilty! I read this chapter like a month ago! And I totally ADORED it! It´s so hot and your characterization is always so good! :-)

My favs:

"...her hand lingering on his longer than necessary"; "...whispering something at his ear that Brennan couldn’t understand"
No wonder why Brennan is so jealous! Even if she doesn´t want to admit it! LOL. God know I would be jealous!

"And then you can have dinner with Danielle"
LOL!! This line was PRICELESS! I couldn´t stop laughing! And the whole conversation in the car and then at the constructon site is awesome. I really love the way you wrote the dialogue between them. For me, Brennan was totally in character, trying to speak rationally in order to hide her anger. You did a great job :-)

"You’re trying to drive me away just like you always do. (...) I’m not allowing you do it to me just because you’re scared for being jealous"I have no words to tell you how much I loved ( ... )

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