PDF OF NIGHTMINDS ONLINE AND READY FOR YOU TO READ

[spygirl690]

Title: Nightminds

Page/Word count: 101 pages/48,452 words

Author: Spygirl690

Rating/warning: NC-17 for violence, language, drug use, and graphic sex scenes. These are gay sex scenes (guy on guy) if that freaks you out, kindly go read something else.

Characters/Parings: Bruce Wayne, Jack Napier

Summary: This is set before Batman Begins and was inspired

Comments

[chickenpattysan]

Did you post the beginning of this before? I am sure I read it once! Can't wait to find out how it ends. :-D

[spygirl690]

Yes I posted it almost 2 years ago and just finished it. I can't wait to hear your thoughts. :)

[chickenpattysan]

Finished it tonight. Well done! I loved all the twists and turns in the plot. And I like how it ended with each of them internalizing a bit of the other. Jack holds onto a piece of Bruce's warmth and humanity, and Bruce learns to embrace his dark side a bit more. It was so tragic. I'd love to find out what goes through Bruce's head when he finally meets Joker again!

[spygirl690]

And I like how it ended with each of them internalizing a bit of the other.

Ha Ha! I honestly didn't realize that until you mentioned it! I definitely let Jack and Bruce control where I went with my writing. It is always so interesting what comes out when you let the characters talk to you instead of putting words in their mouths.

I may write a second part in a bit but for now I wanted to keep Nightminds as the only piece of a larger story. From the moment I started writing this I envisioned how part II would be. I believe that Bruce wouldn't recognize Jack, he would have to put the pieces together. Also Jack has obviously underwent some extreme changes from where I left his character in Nightminds to who he becomes in The Dark Knight. I do think it is worth exploring if a relationship could even develop between them. Bruce is even more damaged in TDK. How could he forgive Jack for all of the things he did in TDK? Interesting questions indeed. ;o)

[hpcathrine]

I haven;t read it yet, but I'm looking forward to it. Thank you so much for your hard work! You are a credit to internet writers everywhere. :D

[spygirl690]

Thanks so much! I hope you enjoy it. I hate that it took me this long but I didn't want to leave this unfinished.

[spygirl690]

Yes! :) This took me very long and for that I'm sorry! There was no way I was leaving this unfinished. :)

[dieewigenacht]

So far I've enjoyed this a lot. It's a very, very interesting story, and you've managed to create a rather unique interaction between these guys, so yeah, I'm really enjoying this.

I however, couldn't help but to notice a couple of mistakes in your spanish. If you want, I can point them for you, if not, don't worry. They don't really interrupt the story in any way.

[spygirl690]

It would be a pain to re-upload everything but I wouldn't mind knowing the mistakes. I have a cousin who is fluent but he never had time to look at it. *boo* I'm glad you are enjoying it so far. :)

[luvenck]

Ah-Ha!!!!! Just got it downloaded... Off to read to find out what has happened with Jack and Bruce now! Thanks so much for sharing all this with us! What a wonderful gift!

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Cat

[spygirl690]

I can't wait to hear what you think! <3 Enjoy the Holiday.