Hey Angela, This piece of writing is truly ingenious. The way in which you write is so descriptive, emotive and sensitive. The way you make dull objects and such simple tasks sound so alive by way of your expression is so incredible. I do not know if you have done this on purpose, but the way you write about the girl makes the reader feel immense empathy for her and what she is going through. I would really like to read more from you, if it is all like this. Well done!
Thanks, Rosie. There's only one other Grace ficlet, back a few entries. Let me look - here. And the only other one that's worth a look at is a first person thing with no real title - here. But it *is* just pointless romantic angst, the type of thing that only holds meaning to the person writing it.
Ah well, c'est la vie. We can't be good at everything.
I like very much the way you use your writing to stand back -as it were- and dramatize your own creative possibilities. This is clearly one way of doing it. And it gives you a real freedom in your choice of images. So is "Grace" coming together in some larger genre? Thanks for your efforts in LJ MG
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And sometimes that's a good thing.
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THAT icon, I like.
I am so tired. COMMENT ON THE OTHER THING SO I CAN SLEEP! <3
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This piece of writing is truly ingenious. The way in which you write is so descriptive, emotive and sensitive. The way you make dull objects and such simple tasks sound so alive by way of your expression is so incredible.
I do not know if you have done this on purpose, but the way you write about the girl makes the reader feel immense empathy for her and what she is going through. I would really like to read more from you, if it is all like this. Well done!
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Ah well, c'est la vie. We can't be good at everything.
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Thanks for your efforts in LJ
MG
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