Following, Part Fifteen [Jack/Juliet] [R] [WIP]

[squeakyboots]

Title: Following (Part Fifteen)
Characters: Juliet, Jack, Charlotte, Daniel, Hurley, Bernard & Rose (so far)
Pairing: Juliet/Jack, hints of Charlotte/Daniel
Rating: R (This part is more like PG-13.)
Spoilers: Season 4, Season 5 (sort of)
A/N:  ACTION! PLOT! I hope this part isn't too unutterably cheesy. Comments = ♥!

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Comments

[nighttiming1022]

Yay action plot!!! :D Brief feed today. I'm so behind on everything.

My two favorite things:

aww Charlotte :) She really cares for Daniel doesn't she?

and I love how Jack and Juliet are working together on this.

And a cliffhanger ending?! NEED MORE PLOT. Like right now.

[squeakyboots]

Hooray! Yes, I've been trying to sneak in a little Charlotte/Dan whenever I can, but it has been difficult what with all the action and exposition whenever they're around. And I totally see Charlotte the "hard on the outside, soft on the inside" type.

I'm working hard on the "more plot" thing. I have almost the whole "section" planned out as far as what's going to happen (and there's a lot!) but the writing takes much longer than the planning! :P

[valhalla37]

This is so, so fantastic!

I mean, I loved every chapter you've done so far, but this cliffhanger especially -- and the appearance of the Others -- has me waiting on the edge of my seat for more! I love how you balance the plot and exposition with real, tangible character development, and the grouping of Jack, Juliet, Charlotte and Daniel is just perfect (my two favourite pairings, so I'm a little biased ;P) as they try to puzzle things out.

[squeakyboots]

Oh, yay! Thank you so much--It's so good to hear that you're still reading and enjoying this, and that you like the character development!

I'm excited myself about the whole section coming up. I've been dying to write this one scene in particular for what seems like forever, because I keep stalling myself accidentally with all these digressions and conversations which come to me as I write. But now I'm truly almost there. I really hope you enjoy where it goes!

[squeakyboots]

Oh, and BTW, would you like to be friends? I've been meaning to ask, but I keep forgetting.

[valhalla37]

Definitely! I'll add you back! :D

[squeakyboots]

Now that's a compliment! Thanks!