Comments | squirrelarmy: FIC: If You'll Be My Bodyguard (I Will Be Your Long Lost Pal)

squirrelarmy

FIC: If You'll Be My Bodyguard (I Will Be Your Long Lost Pal)

Aug 15, 2009 06:52

UMMM. Fanfic. cos I can.

and for those who actually read this lj and are all like, "uhhh WTF you haven't posted in FOREVER", well. uh.

yeah. :)

randomly, I'm going to China in two weeks for work. CRAZY RIGHT?

okay have Avatar fic now.

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Title: If You'll Be My Bodyguard (I Will Be Your Long Lost Pal)
Rating: PG-13 (for uh. language? or ( Read more... )

fic: toph is awesome, avatar

Comments 13

neldluva August 16 2009, 19:15:40 UTC

I absolutely LOVE this fic. It was so cute and perfect, exactly what I want from TophandSokka BFF! fics. <3 My favorite part might have to be where Sokka is trying to convince her to learn how to swim. That was so perfect.

squirrelarmy August 17 2009, 05:45:35 UTC

I've seen so many fanfics where Sokka/Aang/Zuko/whoever Toph is bonding with at the moment teaches her how to swim, and it's always super sweet and cute, but I was like, "Ummmm, what if Toph was all like 'EFF THAT' to their offer?" because that sounded much more amusing. :)

And I'm really glad you liked it! Thank you so much for the nice review!

maxxim_huzzah August 17 2009, 02:13:04 UTC

I loved all of them! I just got into Avatar (yeah, wtf wrrrryyy did it take me so long?), and reading the BFF luff is just what I needed. There were some choice lines in there too ("She didn't notice, calling out another joke as she stumbled across a twig and bent to pick it up, but Sokka was no longer smiling.") Unexpectedly serious and touching. :D

And this was soooo Sokka: "...How the hell did you know I was going to be late? Those flowers just saved my life." LOOOOL

I loved it!

squirrelarmy August 17 2009, 05:43:37 UTC

Dude, don't worry, it took me forever to get into Avatar too, and in the end, it took my roommate owning all three seasons to get me to see it. Once I did, of course, I was all like, "omg TOOOOOOOPH ♥ ♥ ♥ " because she is made of AWESOME, and Sokka is HILARIOUS and yeah. :D

And I'm glad you liked the parts that were a little more serious as well as the humorous stuff, because I was trying to balance it out a touch with a scattering of seriousness. Kinda. :) I'm glad you liked it! (and yay for IC!Sokka! It's so hard to get him sometimes because he's used as such a comic relief point so often.)

surskitty April 12 2010, 20:28:16 UTC

I really like these, especially the arranged marriage one, but er. Your roman numerals go 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 11, 12, 13, 9, 10. I, II, III, IV, V, VI, VII, VIII, IX, X is probably more what you'd want. /)_(\