A Game With the Devil [2/2]

[squishyguns]

a game with the devil [2/2]
angst, seriously. character death? maybe, maybe not.
two gang members get thrown into a game of life and death, pg-13.

Comments

[kaerupalette]

;______;
What is this ending.
Why
I
I cant even--
They would have been so happy ;A;
but thank you for this, it's a lovely fic minus the depressing ending. Nevertheless, it's beautiful!! Thank you for sharing(:

[squishyguns]

Thank you for giving such a nice comment ;___;

really happy to see that you enjoyed it<33

[yaoiokami]

o_________o

That... I was hoping that it wouldn't happen. *cries*
It would have been wonderful if this was taken further and it hadn't concluded like this. You built a pretty awesome world even though there wasn't much mentioned about it. lol

AAAAANGST wae??? T_T

[squishyguns]

heheheheh, I just felt like Taemin had to die //sigh// T-T tell me about this world you're talking about.. I don't seem to understand //facepalm// xD

THANKS FOR READING BB, HOPE YOU LIKED IT! <3

[jishu]

I really loved this. Very nicely written~ Too bad Taemin died but it's for the dramatic effect~ hehehe ^^

[squishyguns]

Glad you liked it! Thanks for reading<3

[cause4rebellion]

NNoooo!!!! Why Taemin? They could have built a future and been best buds! Angst. Angst. Angst. Angst. D:

Have you by any chance read The Outsiders? cuz this story seems a bit like parts of it and tae and jjong seem like Ponyboy and Johnny

[squishyguns]

...actually..my English class is currently using that book... o_o But, no, I got the inspiration from somewhere else :O I can't seem to relate this to Ponyboy and Johnny though, because the both of them are already the closest ever and yeah ;~;

hehe, but thanks for reading, sorry Taemin had to die, I felt like it needed to happen *__*

[elena0ena]

oh noooo. taemin-ah..

[squishyguns]

i wanna write more gang!jongtae ;____;
and thanks for reading bb ♥