Title: Better Off Gone Author: srchxandxdstry Rating: G Pairings: None Warnings: Spoilers for 5x02 Summary: Reflection on the last scene of that episode. Author's Note: Thanks to
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Something i didn't say last night was that i think the first line is so awesome. BECAUSE. It isn't like... a "beginning". Its in the middle of the situation, which is exactly where you are starting. Rather than showing the whole scene, you're jumping in halfway. (Which isn't a bad thing)
And! I also like how the story isn't sided? Its just Dean's thoughts. It has a really appropriate tone.
I actually just started it like that cause it was where my mind was at, and i was like "i'll come back and write something to intro it later" but then when i reread it, i figured i'd have to do, cause i couldn't be bothered :S:S
well i'm glad you enjoyed it. nothing worse than having to sit through a boring story D:
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And! I also like how the story isn't sided? Its just Dean's thoughts. It has a really appropriate tone.
It was my pleasure to read =) And to reread.
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I actually just started it like that cause it was where my mind was at, and i was like "i'll come back and write something to intro it later" but then when i reread it, i figured i'd have to do, cause i couldn't be bothered :S:S
well i'm glad you enjoyed it. nothing worse than having to sit through a boring story D:
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It was lovely. But omg the angst brb dying inside.
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haha that angst will be the death of us hahaha
thankyou for reading it :D
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