Lumos; Chapter Four

[sripley]

The Great Hall buzzed with conversation, students and staff alike taking the time during supper to catch up on the day’s activities and enjoying the downtime inside the toasty walls of the hall. Snow continued to fall steadily outside, blanketing the entire school in a fine layer of white. Reid had loved snow as a child, as most children do, but

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[drunkyluke]

god, you weave an excellent tale. this is beautiful. heartbreakingly beautiful! those poor boys. to finally find each other, and then this, the worst thing that could possibly happen. they need each other more now than they ever have. amazing chapter. my heart was in my throat when reid found the mark! i really couldn't believe it. and then the truth comes out. all the horrible, gutrenching truth. i don't know who to fell more sorry for. they need to be together. they have to draw the strength that they both need from each other.

[sleeper6]

Wow, very emotional and powerful. I can imagine the magical world still suffering after the war.

Great chapter!

[theshahofblah]

You've done an amazing cross-over with HP and you certainly know your Hogwarts!

My fave part has to be the twist that Luke has the dark mark. He is like the new Draco. And Damian is a Death Eater. Yeah!

I loved the scene where they are making love and Reid discover the mark. Gripping right in the throes of passion. Wonderful.

I love that Reid lost his sister to Voldemort and that Luke has no choice but to reveal his Grimaldi lineage.

[sripley]

"you certainly know your Hogwarts!"
That is quite possibly the greatest compliment anyone could ever give me xD I'm just as obsessed with Harry Potter as I am with LuRe... so yeah, hehe.
I'm so glad you like the twists! And yes! Luke is definitely like Draco, I'm glad someone pointed out that parallel!
Thank youuu! <3

[theshahofblah]

I'm a huge Harry Potter fan too, so it's great to see such a well thought out cross-over, that is right in every single detail. Your love for the universe AND Lure is very tangible in your writing here.

PS I'm sure you're aware that Maggie Smith is Toby Stephen's mom? It's just cute that you united them in your fic.

[sripley]

Thank you again!! <3

.... I actually didn't know that! xD I don't know much about Toby, just that when I was looking for a 'face' for Dervis, he instantly hit me, he was perfect. Oh, the sweet irony!