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SS Challenge - "Even Better for the Soul"

Mar 30, 2005 11:27

Title: Even Better for the Soul
Author: Shayheyred, website www.ChezShay.net ( Read more... )

Comments 37

estrella30 March 30 2005, 17:23:11 UTC

omg - hot, hot, HOT, angsty porn. my favorite.

only the prominent vein in Ray's forehead revealed that All Was Not Well in Ray-Land.

and this line cracked me up. You rule!!

shayheyred March 30 2005, 17:50:20 UTC

Thanks - trust me to shove a funny line into a serious story. I'm such a clown.

See you tomorrow! Wheeeeeeeeeee!

lalejandra March 30 2005, 17:45:10 UTC

Oh!

the virago called Ray Kowalski.

Perfect. Perfect!!

I liked this a heck of a lot.

shayheyred March 30 2005, 17:50:39 UTC

Hee. Thanks so much.

brooklinegirl March 30 2005, 17:52:08 UTC

Fraser hadn't even realized he was hard, but he was, oh, he was, so hard, with anger and excitement and confusion and the nearness of the virago called Ray Kowalski.

GOD, I love this. You're wonderful. This is what I love about these guys - how so much of the attraction between them is based in - frustration and differences and misunderstandings, deliberate and otherwise. But it goes way deeper than that, and when Ray does this - just PUSHES it, and says FUCK IT, and makes Fraser fucking ADMIT something - my god, it's wonderful. This was hot and felt very real and just - yeah. I love it.

brooklinegirl March 30 2005, 17:52:59 UTC

also: your title made me grin. Awesome.

shayheyred March 30 2005, 17:59:15 UTC

Funny - I could NOT think of a title, so I just went with this. Glad it worked for you!

shayheyred March 30 2005, 18:00:20 UTC

Well, you certainly know all about showing Ray pushing Fraser to admit his feelings! I take your comment as the best kind of compliment.

(See you Thursday!)

lovekeller March 30 2005, 18:01:59 UTC

I love how you have Ray so damned angry, yet keeping it under the surface and Fraser having no clue why he's so angry. Very hot, extremely angsty, a great read. Thanks

shayheyred March 30 2005, 18:39:33 UTC

::Beams:: Thank you so much! What nice comments.

pearl_o March 30 2005, 18:23:23 UTC

Mmmmmmm, I loved this. It's such an interesting episode, anyway, with all the tension and things going on there, and this is lovely and hot and very real. Yay.

shayheyred March 30 2005, 18:40:35 UTC

Thank you! Yeah, I love that episode, for so many reasons, including Dead Bob and the cop singing Christmas carols.