Hermione and Severus are so real and unforced, here, and their interaction feels natural and as between equals. I really enjoyed reading your fic for those reasons, and for your use of description and humor, both of which drew me immediately into the story. Oh, and damn my word count limit! I could have cheerfully continued reading, but I think you picked a lovely moment on which to end, not an ending for Severus and Hermione, but a beginning for them. This is a lovely story; thank you for sharing it!
I love Hermione and Snape as coworkers that go from enemies to lovers! Such an intriguing story! I also HC that Snape listens to classical music. Especially Schubert :D
And my favorite line....
Changing tactics, he composed a dirty limerick involving Hagrid, a turtle, and a cheese knife XD
Hagrid once worked and he planned. He Took a great swig of some brandy. Then found a cheese knife And a turtle-wildlife!- To relieve him, for he was quite randy.
It's interesting how things began for our favorite couple.
Hermione's first positive thoughts about Severus, before she began to notice his lovely body:
Having Granger in my head is more tolerable than the Dark Lord's presence. Thank Merlin for small mercies. Hermione chuckled. Snape could be quite funny when he wanted to. Who knew?
Severus' first positive thoughts:
She smelt faintly like orange-blossom and another more earthy tone he couldn't quite identify. and The last thing he needed was her catching him checking out her arse.
By the way, I think that Snape is a lot more attractive to women than he thinks he is. He receives smiles from Lisa and from the Welcome Witch, both that go unnoticed.
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And my favorite line....
Changing tactics, he composed a dirty limerick involving Hagrid, a turtle, and a cheese knife XD
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I’ve been trying to come up with something since I read this, but I just can’t make it happen.
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Took a great swig of some brandy.
Then found a cheese knife
And a turtle-wildlife!-
To relieve him, for he was quite randy.
Yeah... I think I got nothing.
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Hermione's first positive thoughts about Severus, before she began to notice his lovely body:
Having Granger in my head is more tolerable than the Dark Lord's presence. Thank Merlin for small mercies.
Hermione chuckled. Snape could be quite funny when he wanted to. Who knew?
Severus' first positive thoughts:
She smelt faintly like orange-blossom and another more earthy tone he couldn't quite identify.
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The last thing he needed was her catching him checking out her arse.
By the way, I think that Snape is a lot more attractive to women than he thinks he is. He receives smiles from Lisa and from the Welcome Witch, both that go unnoticed.
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