FIC: All Fun & Games (PG)

[iulia_linnea]

Title: All Fun & Games
Type: Fic
Prompter: Anonymous
Creator: celticreeder
Rating: PG
(Highlight to View) Warning(s): Suggestive dialogue.
(Highlight to View) Prompt: Severus and Hermione find an exciting way to unwind after a difficult day.
Summary: Severus just wants to get home to play with is wife.

Comments

[iulia_linnea]

Bwahahahaha! Oh, I love this, and the triplets' names are terribly perfect. ;)

[turtlewexlerfic]

😂😂😂 This was equal parts cute and funny! You definitely had me fooled with that dialogue at first. 😏

[reynardo]

Heh. I had my suspicions. And they were borne out beautifully.

[q_drew]

Oh hohohohoho, MA! You are sneaky!

Your suggestive dialogue was spot-on and so enjoyable. You certainly had me wondering what was going on - especially when Snape whined she had started without him, “You say it takes me out of the mood to play with you the way you want me to.", and then Hermione telling him he made her come too soon! 😂😂🙊🙈

It is so nice to see the two of them comfortable and at ease with each other.

Also this: Their father's triumphant shout caught their attention. They watched, slightly embarrassed and amused as their normally straight-laced father did the universal winner's dance around his scowling wife. Is such a wonderful visual and I absolutely adore it. ADORE IT.

This was smashing, MA! 👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼

[jaxomsride]

I do love the way it sounded like they were doing something else.