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FIC: The Mirror's Reflection (PG-13)

Jul 15, 2020 08:00

Title: The Mirror's Reflection
Type: Fic
Prompter: Anonymous
Creator: debjunk
Beta(s): Amortentia in my Veins and brenamarie
Rating: PG-13
(Highlight to View) Warning(s): None.
(Highlight to View) Prompt: When Severus and Hermione inadvertently look into the Mirror of Erised together, this is what they see (SS/HG).
Note: Thanks for a prompt that was so intriguing I ( Read more... )

2020 summer fanwork, fic

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debjunk August 12 2020, 02:10:47 UTC

Thank you! Sometimes slow is the way to go, but other times... it just makes more sense to not do so. It's funny no matter how much I write, Severus and Hermione are always a little bit different in each of my stories.

jaxomsride July 18 2020, 00:38:47 UTC

Why can't they cover the mirror up?
Though I am glad they didn't or this story would never have come about!

Well done MA.

debjunk August 12 2020, 02:12:03 UTC

You'd think that a school full of children would be the last place for such a magical object, but nobody has ever accused the magical world of being logical.

Perhaps Albus knew this would happen so made sure it stayed in the school so he could meddle from the grave?

mt_nestor July 19 2020, 19:50:28 UTC

His eyebrow arched at her. "I'm trying to convince you I'm not as much of an arse as I truly am."

Hermione pulled the rose to her chest and laughed heartily. "You'll probably have to bring me a flower every day if that's the case!" she said cheekily.

"That thought did cross my mind," he said with a smirk.

Smirk indeed.

It’s always a pleasure to see the progression of walls being torn down and lack of trust moving into friendship and love. You portrayed this so well. Thank you.

debjunk August 12 2020, 02:13:10 UTC

Oh, thank you so much! That's wonderful praise. It's always a challenge to make fiction seem feasible, and I'm glad this worked for you.

pearle9240 July 26 2020, 22:05:43 UTC

Lovely story, I always like the use of magical deices. I can understand their insecurities, but it was great that they could get over them and come together. Great story, MA.

debjunk August 12 2020, 02:14:19 UTC

It's nice when they can overcome those issues. They're delicious to create, and even better to pull down so they can be closer. It's so nice to hear from you!