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FIC: Time to Rise (R)

Aug 09, 2020 00:00

Title: Time to Rise
Type: Fic
Prompter: iulia_linnea
Creator: iulia_linnea
Beta(s): Shog and delphipsmith
Rating: PG
(Highlight to View) Warning(s): The use of "fuck" far more than a PG-13 rating would allow.
(Highlight to View) Prompt: Prompt yourself for fic!
Note: Movie summaries courtesy of Seventh Sanctum's Action Film Generator. Thank you, Shog and delphipsmith, for beta'ing.
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2020 summer fanwork, fic

Comments 22

q_drew August 10 2020, 06:14:29 UTC

I shouldn’t have started reading this at just before 2AM but once I started I couldn’t stop. Oh, MA! This was utterly delightful (and frightful as my autocorrect wanted to say) in all the ways.

Your banter between SS and HG was spot-on. A comfortable established relationship and you gave us snippets of the kids too! What a blessing. I cackled every time one of them would reveal that nothing is getting past them - the vampire, Hugo sneaking back in, Hugo’s friend.

These bits were my favorites:
“How'd they-seriously, go sit down-and put a warming charm on the corn." Severus sighed. "But I like walking behind you." "You like staring at my ar-", Hugo did that." "Fuck!" "Problem?" Hermione called. "Stubbed toe!", They might be fucking?" Rose suggested. Severus blinked. "You've been spending far too much time with me. Go back to your fa-" "Sperm do-" "-ather's and tell him that Taylor's been using Firebright.", and “ How's Marmaduke, then? Still an inveterate flirt?" "You know about-" "The vampire in our subcellar? Of course I ( ... )

iulia_linnea August 11 2020, 04:57:21 UTC

I'm so very glad that you enjoyed my fic; thank you so much for your lovely comment! *dances*

morbidmuchfics August 10 2020, 10:43:41 UTC

This was an absolute joy to read, and I'm sure I strained some muscles laughing. Excellent job, MA!

iulia_linnea August 11 2020, 04:57:45 UTC

I'm so glad to know that you laughed; thank you so much for commenting! :D

jaxomsride August 10 2020, 15:54:06 UTC

Definitely a life less ordinary!
I am intrigued by the movie descriptions, where did you get them?

iulia_linnea August 11 2020, 04:58:30 UTC

Thank you for commenting! There's a link to the Seventh Sanctum generator I used in the header. :D

rayvyn2k August 10 2020, 18:19:43 UTC

Reading that was like watching a manic comedy. Thanks for the giggle, MA.

iulia_linnea August 11 2020, 04:58:51 UTC

You're so welcome, and thank you so much for commenting! :D

pearle9240 August 14 2020, 02:26:17 UTC

Too funny! Love all the different scenarios. Severus' language rubbing off on Rose was a hoot. Thanks for a great story!

iulia_linnea August 14 2020, 11:31:31 UTC

You're welcome, and thank you so much for commenting! :D