its too cold outside for angels to die (River/Eleven)

[ssw_loved]

Title: its too cold outside for angels to die 
Rating: T 
Characters: River, Eleven 
Summary: And so she never truly leaves him.

Comments

[fangirl_here]

It's the line about River 'seeping through' that got me. And the (What a sight to die to.)

Oh, that was just lovely. Really, really lovely. And from a less sentimental viewpoint, the way that you switched the points of view around and gave us almost twice the story was really nice.

[ssw_loved]

Thank you! I'm glad that came across well. It's always fun to play with points of view, but I'm always cautious with how it's going to come out.

[hanorganaas]

*claps* Beautiful sweetie absolutely beautiful.

[ssw_loved]

You know you love me.

[nancybrown]

Gorgeous!!

[ssw_loved]

Thank you!