the years he gave her (River/Eleven)

[ssw_loved]

Title: the years he gave her
Rating: R
Characters: River/Doctor
Warning/Spoilers: sexual situations (non-graphic sex); LKH
Summary: Her hands show him what it means for her, to travel inside a box bigger on the inside. They show him how she sees his TARDIS, colors and warmth and light and the only place that has ever been home
Author's Note: I can

Comments

[daiseechain]

Here via dwfiction.

This was beautiful and bittersweet. Lovely writing.

[ssw_loved]

Oh, thank you! I like knowing which communities are actually bringing in viewers, because then I can cut down on the cross posting. Thank you!

[ssw_loved]

Oh, I definitely think Rory does as well.

[ssw_loved]

<3 thank you

[a_phoenixdragon]

OMG...this is lovely!! This River and the DOCTOR and ohhh, how much he hurts us both - and yet the wonders he shows us all!! I hope she ca make him see, how very very beautiful and wonderful he is. I know he has done that for her, cured her lonely heart - and that alone? Yeah, I'd give up lifetimes of loneliness for one full of love and happiness myself!

*HUGS*

[ssw_loved]

I think he needs someone to tell him just how much he is worth it. Because one of the scenes in season six that broke my heart was when the interface showed him himself and he asked for someone that he liked.

[a_phoenixdragon]

YES. GODS, YES. That broke my heart, too...

*HUGS it better*

[eriphi]

Lovely. Well written indeed, heartfelt without being melodramatic. The dialogue is just perfect and so in character. Well done.

[ssw_loved]

<3 I always agonize over dialogue so I'm glad i's been done well.