The Last Centurion (And Other Ways to Win Father of the Year) [River/Eleven, Rory]

[ssw_loved]

Title: The Last Centurion (And Other Ways to Win Father of the Year)
Rating: PG-13
Characters: River/Eleven, Rory 
Summary: from a prompt at spoiler_song by neyllya. She's always been his daughter. Today, he proves it. Because even the strongest of people fall sometimes.

Comments

[bendingwind]

Awww, adorable Ponds being adorable. <3 <3 Love it.

[ssw_loved]

Aren't they just the most adorable thing?

[cinderbella333]

Oh, this was great! I loved both the light-hearted banter and the serious moments. I love how you portrayed all three of them here. I especially love how you did service to Rory's badass'ry even while not over-doing it. Wonderful piece!

[ssw_loved]

Poor Rory snapped a little bit. And thank you. I'm used to writing more introspective things, and it always slips in. My roommate has taken to threatening me that if i don't start writing something happy once in awhile, she's going to move out. xD

[abluestocking]

I loved this! You get their voices so right. :)

And I don't envy the three of them when they get back to Amy...

[ssw_loved]

Thank you! This is my first time writing Rory, so I was a bit worried about the actual writing of him.

And hah, I don't envy them either. I've considered writing that. Just for fun. xD Because I don't suspect they're getting off to easily for this one.

[arliddian]

Oh, the family Pond is just so much fun. I loved this! You portrayed them all so well, so true to their characters. There were so many different emotions playing through this story but you wove them together seamlessly. Thank you for this!

[ssw_loved]

The family Pond is a brilliant thing to play with. And I'm so glad they rang true, because this is my first time writing Rory. I was a bit worried with that.

[vickysg1]

Oh, that was great!! I loved it so much!!

[ssw_loved]

Thank you! I loved writing it.