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SHIP WARS: TEAM JONES: PROMPT 3 ENTRY

Feb 02, 2010 14:01

Title: Communication
Ship: Team Jones
Author: skyblue_reverie
Beta: ennui_blue_lite
Rating: NC-17
Spoilers: None
Warnings: None
Word Count: 1006 according to MS Word
Disclaimer: Any resemblance to anything whatsoever is purely coincidental.

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prompt 3 entry, ship wars, team jones

Comments 169

fringedweller February 2 2010, 19:35:42 UTC

Oh boys. This made me feel so sad! But there's a tiny flicker of hope at the end. Well done, Team Jones!

skyblue_reverie February 3 2010, 00:32:52 UTC

Thank you bb. It ends happy, I promise! They woke up to a rain of daisies and sparkles and realized that they were in TRUE LOVE and needed to get married. Immediately. So they did. Then they had hot sex forEVER.

The end.

See?

Or, if it floats your boat more:

Bones realizes he's been wasting time with that jerk Jim, and that his true love was staring at him all along from across a biobed, so he goes and proposes to Christine, and they get married and have hot sex forEVER. The end.

:D?

*smooch*

geeky_ramblings February 2 2010, 19:37:55 UTC

*brain has official imploded due to hotness overload* I love how they communicate without any words. Love, hot, and I think I once again need another pair of pants.

skyblue_reverie February 3 2010, 00:34:03 UTC

Thank you bb! *hands you new pants* All clean, see?

*loves you up*

geeky_ramblings February 3 2010, 00:50:25 UTC

Oh shiny new pants YAY!

wyntreaurora February 2 2010, 19:40:46 UTC

These two break my heart more often than not - come on boys, can't you two ever be happy for once? *sniff*

This author writes BEAUTIFULLY! You said soooo much in 1000 words, and that's HARD TO DO BB!

skyblue_reverie February 3 2010, 00:35:52 UTC

OMG THANK YOU BB. YOU DON'T EVEN KNOW HOW HAPPY YOUR COMMENT MADE ME. Writing in 1000 words is HARD, and there's always so much I want to get across and such a short space to do it!

And yes, I promise they will be happy forever. This is only the beginning of their happily-ever-after, I swear.

*snogs*

nightshadow_t2 February 2 2010, 19:41:43 UTC

This was gorgeous. Despair and love with just a dash of hope for the future, that it can be better. New and different. Loved it. :)

skyblue_reverie February 3 2010, 00:36:43 UTC

THANK YOU SO MUCH, bb. I'm so glad you liked it. Definitely I intended it to have a hopeful ending!

*hugs*

recumbentgoat February 2 2010, 19:49:10 UTC

beautiful. so true to who they are yet still working beautifully together in a relationship. lol for the most part! hot, achy and heartfelt. <3

skyblue_reverie February 3 2010, 00:38:12 UTC

Hello, you WITH THE MOST AWESOMEST USERNAME EVAR. Thank you so much for your comment, bb. Being true to who they are is the goal of my writing, so I am so glad it worked for you on that level! :D

*smooch*