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Ship Wars: Prompt 5 Entry: Team McChapel

Mar 12, 2010 22:53

Title: Home Before Dark
Author: velvetmouse
Team: McChapel (McCoy/Chapel)
Verse: AOS (though I couldn't resist the TOS icon)
Beta: the amazing and awesome seren_ccd
Rating: PG
Warnings: use and abuse of fairy tales
Prompt: Round 5 - Fairy Tales
Word Count: 4033
Disclaimer: Not mine. So sad. Occasional references and lyrics from Into the Woods, which isn't mine either ( Read more... )

prompt 5 entry, team mcchapel, ship wars

Comments 136

jem80 March 16 2010, 16:23:11 UTC

Fantastic!! This=win!!!

velvetmouse March 16 2010, 23:42:43 UTC

*grin* \o/

Thank you! :D

easilymused1956 March 16 2010, 16:26:47 UTC

What a lovely story. I really liked the way it was almost 'aliens made them...' fic.

Renee

velvetmouse March 16 2010, 23:43:50 UTC

Heehee, thank you! Yeah, it kind of skirted the edges there for a while... not so much a "made them" as a "nudged them gently in the right direction" ;)

janus_74 March 16 2010, 16:28:33 UTC

I like it all, but I absolutely love the beginning conversation.

velvetmouse March 16 2010, 23:44:35 UTC

*grin* thank you! That dialog just popped into my head and the rest of the story followed from there...

elektra_lyte March 16 2010, 16:39:36 UTC

Well done! Love the ending too. :D

velvetmouse March 16 2010, 23:45:16 UTC

Thank you! It seemed so... them. :D

roseandheather March 16 2010, 17:05:57 UTC

Bweee!!

P/C isn't my usual ship, but this is all sorts of CUTE and ADORABLE! I love spunky!Chapel and grumpy!Len and killing Jim and eeeeeeee!!!

velvetmouse March 16 2010, 23:45:46 UTC

*grin* Thank you! :D