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SHIP WARS: PROMPT 6 ENTRY: TEAM SPONES

Apr 30, 2010 07:47

Title: Logic Is Overrated
Author: elfsausage
Betas: orphica and slippery_stone
Length: 5350
Rating: PG
Warnings: Cussing and nekkidness. And schmoop.
Disclaimer: Not mine, not yours.
Prompt: "No, this trick won't work...How on earth are you ever going to explain in terms of chemistry and physics so important a biological phenomenon as love?" -Einstein

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prompt 6 entry, ship wars, team spones

Comments 56

tiedye_ragdoll April 30 2010, 21:51:57 UTC

:D yay. So many good lines in here. i love the fake sex pollen. And Ny is such a good friend.^^

“If you ever let Jim hear about this, neither of us will ever live it down.”

“I will take this secret to the grave,” Spock swore. lol

“Spock, Bones,” Jim smirked. “I guess you encountered some more of that sex pollen down on the planet?”

“Yes, Jim, I think we did.” Bones replied. “And we bought back a lifetime supply.”

elfsausage May 1 2010, 14:11:36 UTC

Thanks, hon! I'm glad you liked the last lines coz I was worried they were a bit too cheesy :-)

tiedye_ragdoll May 1 2010, 14:50:16 UTC

Idk if I'm the best judge tho seeing as how I like cheese. ^^

elfsausage May 1 2010, 14:59:46 UTC

I too have cheese love :-D

weepingnaiad April 30 2010, 22:38:43 UTC

Adorable! I love how everyone, Uhura, Joanna, and Jim knew something that McCoy and Spock wouldn't believe. And Spock trying to explain love to the alien was quite humorous!

Lovely!

elfsausage May 1 2010, 14:13:04 UTC

Well, you know how stubborn they both are :-) They needed a lot of convincing. Thanks, bb :-)

lunasky3 April 30 2010, 22:54:39 UTC

“Yes, Jim, I think we did.” Bones replied. “And we bought back a lifetime supply.” LOL so cute!

elfsausage May 1 2010, 14:14:14 UTC

Thanks, Cap'n! xxx

geeky_ramblings April 30 2010, 23:15:37 UTC

I loved this one. So glad it was our entry YAY! I love the denial between them and how every one see they are meant for each before they do XD

elfsausage May 1 2010, 14:15:10 UTC

Thanks, sweetheart :-) I'm so glad you liked it!

Also, icon love!!!

geeky_ramblings May 1 2010, 14:45:12 UTC

*hugs*

I am loving your icon as well :D

secretsolitaire April 30 2010, 23:22:01 UTC

This made me smile so much! It was all great, but I think my favorite scene was the one with Joanna. She and Bones seem so wonderfully comfortable and secure with each other. ♥

elfsausage May 1 2010, 14:17:11 UTC

Bones might be grumpy with everyone else, but Joanna would always be the one who could see right through it and not be shy to say whatever was on her mind. Hence unrestrained cuddles and talks about love :-) Now I want to write the first half of that conversation, where she tells her dad she has a crush on Pavel!