LJIdol -- Inconceivable

[stacieann15]

Laine took a deep breath as the elevator doors opened.

A brief walk down a hall ended at a table, green and white balloons on the edges, where a brunette woman sat, pen in hand.

“Hi, are you here for the reunion?” she asked, a pleasant smile on her face

Laine recognized her immediately. Lauren Hollbrook, class president of the class of 2001. Important

Comments

[jem0000000]

Ooo! Very ambiguous.

[stacieann15]

Thank you! I was hoping that the ending would be enough! :)

[jem0000000]

You're welcome, and it certainly was!

[stacieann15]

Thank you! :)

[whipchick]

Really like this - the line that really rang for me was "And so many had become nurses." Well-done, and a nice set-up at the end!

[stacieann15]

Thank you very much. It has surprised me how many of the girls in my own high school class have become nurses (some of whom would terrify me if I looked up and saw them at the end of my hospital bed!)

[noodledays]

ah, I'm torn on which way I'd want to see her go. :o

[stacieann15]

I think I am, too! :) Thanks for reading.

[zeitgeistic]

I like that cliffhanger ending!

[stacieann15]

Thank you! I am glad people seem to be responding well to it!