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stakeaclaim

The Relevance of Spike Part 3

Jun 01, 2005 10:44

Summary: A game and a new twist…

Warning: Strong language

Feedback: Please let me know what you think…

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spike, angel, fic, angel fic

Comments 12

Re: The marie72 June 2 2005, 18:59:55 UTC

Good chapter...

Re: The stakeaclaim June 2 2005, 19:14:32 UTC

Hey there, glad you liked! Thanks for letting me know, it's so appreciated.

Re: The Relevance of Spike marie72 June 2 2005, 19:00:33 UTC

Good chapter...

Re: The Relevance of Spike stakeaclaim June 2 2005, 19:21:49 UTC

lol! Ummm. Thanks again?

It's ok, I'm new to lj's and yesterday did such a ridiculous thing that I'm still too embarrassed to share!

spangel_kat June 3 2005, 20:59:28 UTC

I love this story so far. I read your other ones -- Love and Remembrance and Make or Break -- on ff.net, too. I like the theme of sire and childe turning into something more. So sweet, and so Spangel!!!

Anyways, great chapter and can't wait for the rest!!! :)

♥ kat

stakeaclaim June 4 2005, 14:07:34 UTC

lol! So you're noticing a theme here? Yes, I admit it I'm totally S/A *G*

Thanks for the feedback Kat, so nice to hear from people who first found the fics at ff. *hugs*

lynnenne June 18 2005, 03:55:57 UTC

Just catching up on this story. Some nice writing here, and I particularly enjoyed this exchange:

“So those Lakers, damned disappointing on Wednesday. Four points short.”

Wesley and Spike looked at each other and Gunn sighed.

“So Man U v Arsenal…” Spike began hopefully.

The other two shook their heads.

“County cricket?”

Hee! Also, Yogi Bear. *snort*

stakeaclaim June 18 2005, 07:22:57 UTC

Glad you like... I *love* it when I can make people snort! *BG*

bedawyn July 3 2005, 06:10:56 UTC

Hey, just found this story and am so, so sorry that I have to go to sleep before reading the rest of it -- but I know what I'll be doing tomorrow! You do a really good job of balancing the Spike/Angel with the rest of the ensemble, and of balancing the serious parts of the story with the same surreal humor that characterizes the series, and as well as having a knack for visual images. Spike's "testiculating" had me laughing out loud (it's totally something he would come up with), as did the "raven of doom" earlier (that line seems over the top at first, until the flapping coattails hit you as he tromps past and you realize it's absolutely perfect).

stakeaclaim July 4 2005, 17:34:10 UTC

i wrote sumfin wot was pperfect AND made you lol? Woo hoo!!

Sorry, lost it a bit there.

*hangs head in shame*

What I *meant* to say was thank you for such a lovely review, I'm so pleased you like the fic so far

bedawyn July 4 2005, 22:07:26 UTC

Seriously, I just finished "Love and Remembrance" and was considering posting to my journal just to enthuse about you, but figured I should be thorough and finish the rest of the stories first. You've still got a few mechanical problems with the writing, but a ton of sheer talent to make up for it. I haven't agreed with all your plot decisions, but I don't remember the last time I've run into so many scenes or snippets of dialogue in such a short time that just screamed canon, that they weren't dependent on the plot or particular story context but instead tapped directly into the Buffyverse, that seemed as if they simply must have happened in multiple timestreams, not just the particular timestream we're reading about in a given story. Right now I'm thinking of Giles response to puppet!Spike and "Even I'm starting to get abandonment issues." *g ( ... )

stakeaclaim July 5 2005, 17:56:21 UTC

I'm overcome... what a wonderful review! And thanks for your offer of webspace - email winging its way to you. *G* Debs